Wonderful one here! Thanks for sharing it. Perhaps I will use some of your references in my Messenger words.
'Never, Never land
and you won't understand
because you will never grow old
Its sad to say that you will never leave
'cause this is never land
Your here to stay with me.
As the long years go by
and we're still the same
as we were as teens
I can remember that you were
16 and i was 18.
we lived in never land
But trouble always comes
because you say to me
"That i wanna go
go way back home
because i miss my family,
my home, my friends, and
my boyfriend
o why o why
o why can't i go home?"
And i spun around, and said
you can never leace!
'cause this is never land
and who wants to go home?!
you are here to stay with me
besides!
your friends are all gone
along on their way
and here you must stay
oh! its so damn funny
here in never land
you will Never grow old
but so long have yous tayed
for
35 long years
oh! i must've
forgot to tell
you taht this is never land
and you will never go
because you are here
to stay with me.
Your parnets are dead,
a long time ago[
your boyfriend got
married in June 24, 2002
he already had some kids
since then
I'm sorry oh i'm so
damn sorry!
On earth, you just don't exist!
and when you die?
you'll die alone!
As a 16 year old
you have never lived
not even ever love
oh what a tragedy!"
And its sad to say
she spent her days alone
she cried and cried
again
but no one would lend an ear
until we saw
her you limp body
surrounded by blook
along the riverside
...
I'll tell you once again
this is
never, never land!
and you won't understand
because you will never grow old
Its sad to say taht you will
never leave
'cause this is never land
Your here to stay....
with me.
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Last edited by blackrose92; Dec 17, 2008 at 07:28 AM. Reason: can i put a title? its called You will Never go home
I'm the best you'll ever have because i am that f*ing AMA-zing chic who can stand on her own d*n feet and becasue of you I am the GreatestThank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen
Wonderful one here! Thanks for sharing it. Perhaps I will use some of your references in my Messenger words.
blackrose92 (Dec 21, 2008)
omgosh I love this poem, when reading it I was trying to figure out the true meaning and for some reason I couldnt most of the times I can... so what is the meaning I must know.... just some spelling errors that is all beside that it is good.
Good Job i liked it alot i never can understand how people get the passion to right like this .
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