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![]() | December entry 'Never, Never land and you won't understand because you will never grow old Its sad to say that you will never leave 'cause this is never land Your here to stay with me. As the long years go by and we're still the same as we were as teens I can remember that you were 16 and i was 18. we lived in never land But trouble always comes because you say to me "That i wanna go go way back home because i miss my family, my home, my friends, and my boyfriend o why o why o why can't i go home?" And i spun around, and said you can never leace! 'cause this is never land and who wants to go home?! you are here to stay with me besides! your friends are all gone along on their way and here you must stay oh! its so damn funny here in never land you will Never grow old but so long have yous tayed for 35 long years oh! i must've forgot to tell you taht this is never land and you will never go because you are here to stay with me. Your parnets are dead, a long time ago[ your boyfriend got married in June 24, 2002 he already had some kids since then I'm sorry oh i'm so damn sorry! On earth, you just don't exist! and when you die? you'll die alone! As a 16 year old you have never lived not even ever love oh what a tragedy!" And its sad to say she spent her days alone she cried and cried again but no one would lend an ear until we saw her you limp body surrounded by blook along the riverside ... I'll tell you once again this is never, never land! and you won't understand because you will never grow old Its sad to say taht you will never leave 'cause this is never land Your here to stay.... with me. [blank verse]
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![]() ![]() | Re: December entry Wonderful one here! Thanks for sharing it. Perhaps I will use some of your references in my Messenger words. |
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![]() | Re: December entry omgosh I love this poem, when reading it I was trying to figure out the true meaning and for some reason I couldnt most of the times I can... so what is the meaning I must know.... just some spelling errors that is all beside that it is good.
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