Drip Drop (9/9/07)

KuwiRules145 · Aug 09, 2007, 04:40 PM

Only heaven
understands me

Ever since
I was left to be

My heart
has broken into two

As pain has
enter through me too

Drip Drop
Goes my hard falling tears

Every Since
those unfaithful years

Drip Drop
yelling I'm only a fool

Why do most
people use me as a tool

Being love
Only causes me lies and shame

I guess
Thats what makes me lame

Drip Drop
These tears go on forever

I think I'll just
never be loved again never

Peach_follows · Aug 09, 2007, 09:03 PM

So there are 2 poems in the contest with a title about water and the date behind it.... <_< ... >_> ...Anybody else see that? I feel left out.... j\k

Yiesh.... that was quite sad. Its like you focused on one tear at a time. And every tear had its own story. Made me sad, but it was a nice poem.

KuwiRules145 · Aug 09, 2007, 09:44 PM

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Originally Posted by Peach_follows

So there are 2 poems in the contest with a title about water and the date behind it.... <_< ... >_> ...Anybody else see that? I feel left out.... j\k

Yiesh.... that was quite sad. Its like you focused on one tear at a time. And every tear had its own story. Made me sad, but it was a nice poem.

Really! Theres any other poem with with the water thing! AWESOME!!!! And thank you as well so THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!

Aug 09, 2007, 04:40 PM	#1 (permalink)
KuwiRules145 ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart Posts: 962 Thanks: 3 Thanked 23 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 13,177	Drip Drop (9/9/07) Only heaven understands me Ever since I was left to be My heart has broken into two As pain has enter through me too Drip Drop Goes my hard falling tears Every Since those unfaithful years Drip Drop yelling I'm only a fool Why do most people use me as a tool Being love Only causes me lies and shame I guess Thats what makes me lame Drip Drop These tears go on forever I think I'll just never be loved again never __________________ ♡♥♡♥No matter what I'll always love you for Eternity...I love you Kyle♥♡♥♡ Never let me go... hold me tight and love me like I do ♡♥Anime Life♥♡
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Aug 09, 2007, 09:03 PM	#2 (permalink)
Peach_follows Still pointing the sword? Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Friendly Fridley Posts: 972 Thanks: 28 Thanked 18 Times in 18 Posts Credits: 10,645	Re: Drip Drop (9/9/07) So there are 2 poems in the contest with a title about water and the date behind it.... <_< ... >_> ...Anybody else see that? I feel left out.... j\k Yiesh.... that was quite sad. Its like you focused on one tear at a time. And every tear had its own story. Made me sad, but it was a nice poem. __________________ I will give you a son....
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