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    The End of My Journey

    I think there is only way how a journey (of love, life, learning etc.) can end- death. So here is my variation of the theme...

    Too tired...
    Too afraid...
    Too far away...
    Too afraid...

    I guess it all was too much…

    I see your lips moving
    I hear not what you say.
    Tears filling my whole body
    I feel no pain…

    Your smile,
    Your hug with shaking hands,
    Your kiss on my forehead,
    My name on your lips,
    A tear shed for my pain…
    It’s all I remember-
    It’s all I bring with me.

    A scream breaks out from the depths of my soul.

    Darkness steps back.

    Whispers of the wind…
    Sunlight breaking through the clouds.
    And You.

    This is the end of my journey.

    Blow out the candles…
    No prayers can help me now.

    I've just tried to put emotion in it... and if it seems confusing, hasted and mixed up, it's just because death is like that.
    Last edited by Lasura; Sep 28, 2007 at 03:57 AM.

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    Re: The End of My Journey

    i agree with u...death seems like that.. but then again..u gotta die to know the feeling...XD jk ^^

    This is a very good poem lasura ^^ very sad though...and very painful...interesting read.. ^^ keep up the good work..and good luck to ya..

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