The Fall - October Entry

Autumn brings the breeze
that softly paints my life.
It also tells me ,
yes i guess i did fall.


The leaves of the season
gently swaying in the wind.
Like my heart dancing and swaying
to the music ,we just played.

The season of holidays
This time makes me smile.
Maybe somehow you'll be near me
if not in distance, maybe in your heart.

Our souls touching,
In every minute we spend.
Just talking and sending messages each day.
I don't know how else to put it,
With you I am falling each day.

I told you i don't understand it.
There seems to be no reason for this.
You told me to trust what I feel.
It seems to be overwhelming me each day.

I hope that this fall doesn't turn to winter.
I want this floating feeling , to have no ending.
Do I have to say it? Do I have to shout?
Yes I have fallen with someone.
And my heart has no doubts.

A really nice poem ^^ The flow really made me feel like floating or dancing, as you describe in the poem.
And I like the way you use the pun "fall"- falling tree leaves, falling as failing to do smth. and falling in love... makes the reader search for what this poem really means.
And the poem is filled with gentle feelings, sweet love... very nice ^^ You keep impressing me in POTM.

Hey im new to the site and i absolutly love your poem. I have a few of my own but I don't seem to understand they ways in which they are uploaded on to the site can you help. Please and thank you!