Fear??

fireandice · Oct 04, 2007, 06:29 PM

As the darkness of night closes in all around you, your mind starts to question
Am I really alone?
Erie shadows shifting around you and cold breezes drift down your neck
Your adrenaline kicks up, your breathing shallows
Movements in your side vision, did you really see something?
The sensation of something watching you
Terror grips your heart with every sound that you hear
Is something coming after you or is it just your imagination
Foreboding makes your heart skip a beat, is it stalking you with a murderous intent
Can it hear the rapid pounding in your chest?
Hair stands up on the back of your neck, is it really behind you?
The smell of blood and stench of decay reach your nostrils
Two liquid drops hits the back of your neck and run downwards
Wanting to run but unable to do so
You tightly close your eyes and hold your breath.....
Opening your eyes again your all alone safely back in your bed
Your heart still racing, was it really all a dream?

itachigirl · Oct 04, 2007, 07:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by fireandice

As the darkness of night closes in all around you, your mind starts to wonder
Am I really alone?
Erie shadows on the ground around you and cold breezes drift down your neck
Your adrenaline kicks up, your breathing increases
Movements in your side vision, did you really see something?
The feeling of something watching you
Fear grips your heart with every sound that you hear
Is something coming after you or is it just your imagination
Fear makes your heart skip a beat, is it stalking you with the intent to kill you
Can it hear your heart pounding in your chest?
Hair stands up on the back of your neck, is it really behind you?
The smell of blood and stentch of decay reach your nostrils
Two liquid drops hits the back of your neck and run downwards
Wanting to run but unable to do so
You tightly close your eyes and hold your breath.....
Opening your eyes again your all alone safely back in your bed
Was it all a dream?

very cool, i liked it a lot.

sorry,the original message was too short........itachi!itachi!itachi!

Umbriel · Oct 04, 2007, 07:40 PM

Ooooo. Very nice. Do you have others poems on the site?

fireandice · Oct 04, 2007, 07:44 PM

Hey thanks you two. And yes I do but not like this one. Thanks again for the praise.

*RayMe* · Oct 10, 2007, 01:57 AM

OOh.. nice...i love the way the poem goes and the description.. ^^ short.. but nice..
good luck to ya..

hmm i think i should post 1 up...

i love horror poems ^^

Oct 04, 2007, 06:29 PM	#1 (permalink)
fireandice ~always by your side~ Join Date: May 2007 Location: small little hick town Posts: 516 Thanks: 19 Thanked 17 Times in 17 Posts Credits: 10,289	Fear?? As the darkness of night closes in all around you, your mind starts to question Am I really alone? Erie shadows shifting around you and cold breezes drift down your neck Your adrenaline kicks up, your breathing shallows Movements in your side vision, did you really see something? The sensation of something watching you Terror grips your heart with every sound that you hear Is something coming after you or is it just your imagination Foreboding makes your heart skip a beat, is it stalking you with a murderous intent Can it hear the rapid pounding in your chest? Hair stands up on the back of your neck, is it really behind you? The smell of blood and stench of decay reach your nostrils Two liquid drops hits the back of your neck and run downwards Wanting to run but unable to do so You tightly close your eyes and hold your breath..... Opening your eyes again your all alone safely back in your bed Your heart still racing, was it really all a dream? Last edited by fireandice; Oct 14, 2007 at 08:06 PM.
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Umbriel Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Where the frozen tears from the heavens paint everything white. Posts: 358 Thanks: 3 Thanked 13 Times in 12 Posts Credits: 25,287	Re: Fear?? Ooooo. Very nice. Do you have others poems on the site? __________________
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fireandice ~always by your side~ Join Date: May 2007 Location: small little hick town Posts: 516 Thanks: 19 Thanked 17 Times in 17 Posts Credits: 10,289	Re: Fear?? Hey thanks you two. And yes I do but not like this one. Thanks again for the praise.
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RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,589 Thanks: 54 Thanked 26 Times in 23 Posts Credits: 58,560	Re: Fear?? OOh.. nice...i love the way the poem goes and the description.. ^^ short.. but nice.. good luck to ya.. hmm i think i should post 1 up... i love horror poems ^^ __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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