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    Fear??

    As the darkness of night closes in all around you, your mind starts to question
    Am I really alone?
    Erie shadows shifting around you and cold breezes drift down your neck
    Your adrenaline kicks up, your breathing shallows
    Movements in your side vision, did you really see something?
    The sensation of something watching you
    Terror grips your heart with every sound that you hear
    Is something coming after you or is it just your imagination
    Foreboding makes your heart skip a beat, is it stalking you with a murderous intent
    Can it hear the rapid pounding in your chest?
    Hair stands up on the back of your neck, is it really behind you?
    The smell of blood and stench of decay reach your nostrils
    Two liquid drops hits the back of your neck and run downwards
    Wanting to run but unable to do so
    You tightly close your eyes and hold your breath.....
    Opening your eyes again your all alone safely back in your bed
    Your heart still racing, was it really all a dream?
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    Re: Fear??

    Quote Originally Posted by fireandice View Post
    As the darkness of night closes in all around you, your mind starts to wonder
    Am I really alone?
    Erie shadows on the ground around you and cold breezes drift down your neck
    Your adrenaline kicks up, your breathing increases
    Movements in your side vision, did you really see something?
    The feeling of something watching you
    Fear grips your heart with every sound that you hear
    Is something coming after you or is it just your imagination
    Fear makes your heart skip a beat, is it stalking you with the intent to kill you
    Can it hear your heart pounding in your chest?
    Hair stands up on the back of your neck, is it really behind you?
    The smell of blood and stentch of decay reach your nostrils
    Two liquid drops hits the back of your neck and run downwards
    Wanting to run but unable to do so
    You tightly close your eyes and hold your breath.....
    Opening your eyes again your all alone safely back in your bed
    Was it all a dream?
    very cool, i liked it a lot.sorry,the original message was too short........itachi!itachi!itachi!

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    Re: Fear??

    Ooooo. Very nice. Do you have others poems on the site?

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    Re: Fear??

    Hey thanks you two. And yes I do but not like this one. Thanks again for the praise.

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    Re: Fear??

    OOh.. nice...i love the way the poem goes and the description.. ^^ short.. but nice..
    good luck to ya.. hmm i think i should post 1 up... i love horror poems ^^

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