The feeling of blood

With the blood pulsing
And the rain falling
What can be told
The rain is thickening

The rain washes away the blood
But the feeling remains
The blood on my skin
Is running away in the rain

It still feels thick
Like those of a bad day
The feeling will not leave
And I cannot find a way.

The blood has faded.
But the feeling is still with me
And I fear it shall never leave
Oh how I wish the rain would succeed.

The tears of heaven
Not even they can extinguish
All of the sins of Hell.

No matter how much I pray
The sin stays with me.

As blood stains.
So do sins.

uhh...kinda ...scary...but still..good!!!keep up the good description of wrods and feeling .keep it↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥

Oh my this was really sad but it had good emotion in it I loved it shadow keep up the good work!^^

the years have passed
the tears have dried
to the pain forgotten
why did they try
the blood has run
pouring forth
drying in an instant
lives slipped away
they have gone
they've forgotten pain
the rain has fallen
the blood washed away
the sensation is still there
it never fades away

there's a nice a lil poem that i thought of from reading your's.

It's good but you do realize that this is my entry for POTM?

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Originally Posted by shadowrulz

It's good but you do realize that this is my entry for POTM?

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indeed, i do and that was my reply to your poem, it was inspiring, especially to a published poet :)