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    The feeling of blood

    With the blood pulsing
    And the rain falling
    What can be told
    The rain is thickening

    The rain washes away the blood
    But the feeling remains
    The blood on my skin
    Is running away in the rain

    It still feels thick
    Like those of a bad day
    The feeling will not leave
    And I cannot find a way.

    The blood has faded.
    But the feeling is still with me
    And I fear it shall never leave
    Oh how I wish the rain would succeed.

    The tears of heaven
    Not even they can extinguish
    All of the sins of Hell.

    No matter how much I pray
    The sin stays with me.

    As blood stains.
    So do sins.

    A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!

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    Àddïctëd tø |ăüghïñg :) Sonny Sunshine Champion, Volcano Champion, Aquarium Sprengischen Champion, Spiderman Web of Words Champion, Look Alive Champion iluvmyloser is off to a good start iluvmyloser's Avatar
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    Re: The feeling of blood

    uhh...kinda ...scary...but still..good!!!keep up the good description of wrods and feeling .keep it↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: The feeling of blood

    Oh my this was really sad but it had good emotion in it I loved it shadow keep up the good work!^^



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    Re: The feeling of blood

    the years have passed
    the tears have dried
    to the pain forgotten
    why did they try
    the blood has run
    pouring forth
    drying in an instant
    lives slipped away
    they have gone
    they've forgotten pain
    the rain has fallen
    the blood washed away
    the sensation is still there
    it never fades away

    there's a nice a lil poem that i thought of from reading your's.
    "expect the unexpected, life changes in an instant"

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    Re: The feeling of blood

    It's good but you do realize that this is my entry for POTM?

    A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!

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    Re: The feeling of blood

    Quote Originally Posted by shadowrulz View Post
    It's good but you do realize that this is my entry for POTM?
    indeed, i do and that was my reply to your poem, it was inspiring, especially to a published poet
    "expect the unexpected, life changes in an instant"

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