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Aug 22, 2007, 01:53 PM
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  Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: the sign says "in a black hole". Is that even possible?!?!
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 Credits: 6,560 | The feeling of blood With the blood pulsing And the rain falling What can be told The rain is thickening The rain washes away the blood But the feeling remains The blood on my skin Is running away in the rain It still feels thick Like those of a bad day The feeling will not leave And I cannot find a way. The blood has faded. But the feeling is still with me And I fear it shall never leave Oh how I wish the rain would succeed. The tears of heaven Not even they can extinguish All of the sins of Hell. No matter how much I pray The sin stays with me. As blood stains. So do sins.
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Aug 22, 2007, 01:54 PM
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 Àddïctëd tø |ăüghïñg :)  Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: ♥>>WHERE y0U WANNA bE??<<♥
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Credits: 10,093 | Re: The feeling of blood uhh...kinda ...scary...but still..good!!!keep up the good description of wrods and feeling .keep it↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥
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Aug 22, 2007, 07:05 PM
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| Banned Join Date: May 2007 Location: Wishing to go back to Japan...
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Credits: 12,099 | Re: The feeling of blood Oh my this was really sad but it had good emotion in it I loved it shadow keep up the good work!^^ |
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Aug 24, 2007, 05:40 AM
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 Newbie  | Re: The feeling of blood the years have passed the tears have dried to the pain forgotten why did they try the blood has run pouring forth drying in an instant lives slipped away they have gone they've forgotten pain the rain has fallen the blood washed away the sensation is still there it never fades away there's a nice a lil poem that i thought of from reading your's.
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Aug 24, 2007, 08:31 AM
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| Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: the sign says "in a black hole". Is that even possible?!?!
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Credits: 6,560 | Re: The feeling of blood It's good but you do realize that this is my entry for POTM?
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Aug 26, 2007, 06:19 PM
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