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    Freedom [July POTM Entry]

    Ah, Just couldn't stay away.

    As I hold you here,
    you kicking and screaming,
    my intentions become clear.
    You, my dear, are never leaving.

    You are bound to me
    with an unbreakable chain.
    Your heart I shall keep
    and your energy I shall drain.

    Little by little
    your breath begins to weaken.
    Colder and colder,
    your hands, my dear, are freezing.

    I press you up tight
    against that cold damp brick wall
    binding your hands.
    You shall dangle and not fall.

    Light on your feet
    your knees at an angled bend.
    Your soul is mine
    for, you aren't my friend.

    I have taken your freedom
    and your life soon to follow.
    Your body shall hang and rot
    while your soul is mine to swallow.

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    Re: Freedom [July POTM Entry]

    Wow how diverse. It is hard to imagine the same person who wrote "I Love You" now haunts us. Very vivid with the imagery of bondage and a rhyme scheme through out that makes it somehow fun to read aobut the hapless persons current miserable predicament. Fantastically Hopeless. Maybe the sensitive caring person from "I Love You" will save them.

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    Re: Freedom [July POTM Entry]

    Quote Originally Posted by beast View Post
    Wow how diverse. It is hard to imagine the same person who wrote "I Love You" now haunts us. Very vivid with the imagery of bondage and a rhyme scheme through out that makes it somehow fun to read aobut the hapless persons current miserable predicament. Fantastically Hopeless. Maybe the sensitive caring person from "I Love You" will save them.
    This poem is entirely posted up here out of anger i suppose... Its to be when you hate someone so bad you aim to take away their freedom... thus so stated in the poem....

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