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![]() ![]() | Freedom [July POTM Entry] Ah, Just couldn't stay away. As I hold you here, you kicking and screaming, my intentions become clear. You, my dear, are never leaving. You are bound to me with an unbreakable chain. Your heart I shall keep and your energy I shall drain. Little by little your breath begins to weaken. Colder and colder, your hands, my dear, are freezing. I press you up tight against that cold damp brick wall binding your hands. You shall dangle and not fall. Light on your feet your knees at an angled bend. Your soul is mine for, you aren't my friend. I have taken your freedom and your life soon to follow. Your body shall hang and rot while your soul is mine to swallow.
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![]() | Re: Freedom [July POTM Entry] Wow how diverse. It is hard to imagine the same person who wrote "I Love You" now haunts us. Very vivid with the imagery of bondage and a rhyme scheme through out that makes it somehow fun to read aobut the hapless persons current miserable predicament. Fantastically Hopeless. Maybe the sensitive caring person from "I Love You" will save them. |
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