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    Ghosts?

    Ghost?

    Restless,
    tossing myself all over the bed.
    Half asleep,
    It feels like something is not right tonight.
    Sighs,...
    Staring at the ceiling, wondering why i can't sleep.
    The bed is a mess now,
    With heavy eyes and fatigued body... "let me sleep" ...

    The window slowly opens...
    Not noticing it until the wind suddenly blows in.
    The candle lit room is now dark as night...
    Chilling....and cold...
    The breeze blows violently in a forceful way,
    causing the window to flap like a bird's wings.
    Hugging tighter to the pillow,
    then sits up and decides to close the window.

    Stops...
    my body becomes frozen still...
    Theres "something" coming in from the window.
    Unseen...Invisible...(i can feel it)..and it's not wind.
    Certain,
    It's definitely there... i can feel it...
    Hundreds of questions storm in my mind...
    Mostly was, "what should i do?"

    My hair stands like a witch's cat.
    "It's....coming,,,," i whispered to myself.
    "Run~!" "Pretend you are sleeping~!" so many suggestions...
    Confused...My inner selves fighting against each other.
    Then one of them says, "It's too late guys..."
    The bed sinks with two forms of human hands,
    getting nearer each second...
    Until it's over me...(Lying helplessly)...The icy figure stays still...

    My eyes widens...
    An icy breath hits my neck.
    My legs trembles....Im breathing incoherently...Panic attacks...
    Im scared now...Very scared...So terrified i will pass out or pee anytime.
    Suddenly a cold hand rubs my cheek softly gently...(My heart beats faster)...
    With love and care...(it relaxes me up a bit) makes question arises again in my thoughts.
    Then a soft and sweet gentle kiss touches my lips...(my soul almost sprung out)..
    Suddenly the figure dissapears...

    Like a fog...
    It's no more now...
    My stress is gone too...
    and so does my consiousness...
    Waking up the next morning,
    I kept thinking what happened last night.
    I thought it was a dream,
    but,...where did that sweet scent in my room came from?

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    Re: Ghosts?

    Commercial Break: If all this should happen to you.... Then call the
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    A really good poem Ray.... Really exciting keep it up ^^

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    Re: Ghosts?

    Wow! I lovee this poem that you made Rayme =^_^=. Honestly, i was scared due your detailed and descriptive informations. I felt like chilling and shivering after reading your poem. I liked the style that you used, because I rarely see styles like this. The flow of the poem is smooth. The poem transitions is awesome too!

    I was surprised at the twist in the latter part of the poem... the horror feeling changed into something romantic or so. ^^ >>> that ghost took a kiss. lol<<<<

    KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!

    >hmmm... i dunno if I can sleep now... wahehehe j/k<

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Re: Ghosts?

    the rapist ghost.. i might turn into this ghost if i die.. XD

    xD funny 1 there...i doubt u will call em...u'd rather have a "rocking" night with the ghost i'd say XD

    sure ^^ i will do so Raja.. thx...

    aww... it's not scary..

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    Re: Ghosts?

    Rayme.... I thought you were more of an enviromentist?
    so why is poem been written?
    nah just kidding....hahaha I like it, I really do.

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    Re: Ghosts?

    xD well environmental guy has "imaginations" too

    i wanna write a wide area of poem genre... i wanna gain as much experience in poem..
    i wrote dark poems better for ur info ^^ my gf loves em...

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    Re: Ghosts?

    This was really cool. Like a sreenwrite! I was stuck to it like glue.
    Then I read this:
    "Im scared now...Very scared...So terrified i will pass out or pee anytime."
    And it added some comic relief.

    "Pee" is such a great word. Seriously.
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    Re: Ghosts?

    xD a very good word indeed

    Well.. my head was quite a mess.. i am looking at sad,funny,scary and romantic stuff at the same time.. thus.. this poem came xD

    really? a screen write? im thingking of making a fan fic..

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