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    Re: Ghosts?

    i really liked it!!^^ especially when you wrote,

    "The window slowly opens...
    Not noticing it until the wind suddenly blows in.
    The candle lit room is now dark as night...
    Chilling....and cold...
    The breeze blows violently in a forceful way,
    causing the window to flap like a bird's wings.
    Hugging tighter to the pillow,
    then sits up and decides to close the window."

    very good use in details throughout the poem and nice use of metaphors =] good job!
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    Re: Ghosts?

    xD ty ^^ im glad you liked that part... i was sitting on my bed while imagining that...
    hmm...i have no window like that though..

    ty very much lil sis

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    Re: Ghosts?

    Hmmm... I hope that ghost was of your girlfriend... O.o *giggles*

    It had a nice scary feeling in it, but I'm willing to try and beat it, if I get the time.
    It might be impossible to beat you in scary poems but I'm up for all the impossible things, otherways I wouldn't have taken part of all those SOTW and stuff... *sigh* Lasura- always ready to lose

    Nice work Ray, I missed these scary ones a lot... I'm waiting for the next one as always...

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    Re: Ghosts?

    Umm i hope not.. :/ cuz she dissapeared ~.~ *sighs*

    i dare you to beat this xD jk ^^ you can easily defeat me anytime.. ^^

    aww..i'll write more then if i have them ideas... hmm... i better talk a walk in the jungle at night again...or sit by the graveyard...

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    Re: Ghosts?

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    aww..i'll write more then if i have them ideas... hmm... i better talk a walk in the jungle at night again...or sit by the graveyard...
    O.o No, you should not. Too much of a risk that you won' t come back and what will all your fans do then? Watch elfen lied for the third time and find some new creepy movies and anime :P That's what I will do...

    No, actually I'll take a late night safari in South Africa and spend some time with lions, bats, some evil night scretures and stuff...

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    Re: Ghosts?

    @.@ No~!!! thats dangerous... don't go to South Africa then @.@ stay here with me
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    Hmmm a swell idea... but exitement in real life drives adrenaline more ^^ so i'd get more ideas...

    Don't worry ^^ i will come back... those guys by the graveyard know me... were best buds.. ^^ they want me to visit though...been long already since last visit...they miss me like hell i guess by now.. xD

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    Re: Ghosts?

    Oh now come on, South Africa is not that bad.
    sure we have the highest crime rate but there is plenty to see and do.
    oh and a night safari is the best.
    so maybe you should take Rayme with you?

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    Re: Ghosts?

    Africa is where HIV originates from @.@ (from a monkey)

    Yup... all that does sound good but im worried about her,...

    I can't... we life far away from each other.. ^^ hehe... thx btw

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