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    Geezzz,

    Ow...my eyes...such a long poem...owww :P xD

    Just kidding Lovely and amazing description Ray, Every bit of the poem is really detailed. Some parts were like...hilarious XP

    Though you need to edit it more... xD you listening?
    I can see this poem took time to write...yes?...no?

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    Re: Ghosts?

    xD is it that long? i am writing another longer 1 than that...

    xD ty ^^ im glad u think so

    hmm..edit more? what u mean? i have typo or some errors in it?

    hmm about 20 minutes - 25 minutes ^^ something..


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    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    xD is it that long? i am writing another longer 1 than that...

    xD ty ^^ im glad u think so

    hmm..edit more? what u mean? i have typo or some errors in it?

    hmm about 20 minutes - 25 minutes ^^ something..

    ..............Longer one? *sleeps*

    I thought personally that there were too many full stops and commas it made my eyes like this lol

    Wow...20 to 25 minutes? It takes me more than an hour...Ok...more than a day...or a...week

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    Re: Ghosts?

    rayme you always suprise me with your poems. I like how you word it transfixed on every little detail. I have to addmite that I do like the darkness. Keep up on the good work.

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    Re: Ghosts?

    Thank you Sis ^^ glad you like this one as well sure.. will do so ^^

    xD zainab

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    Re: Ghosts?

    wow long ray XD

    but its really v good ^^ i liked it alot ^^

    v spokey like a movie

    minds me of the time i tought i had somthing in my bed and no one was in the room T_T screary lol well anywayf great poem

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    Re: Ghosts?

    Lol ^^ thank you

    my my... well most of us felt that.. i was too when i was little..so it inspired me a bit...
    the movie ghost too...inspired me this poem.. ^^ and a bit of what i feel like now...

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    Re: Ghosts?

    A ghost lover... I like that very much & how you kept the reader thinking it was a ghost that you wouldn't want in your bedroom until the end... Where then she was just lurking to steal a kiss ^_^...

    And the movie Ghost is a classic!!! You picked a good one to inspire you... I love your work & keep it up... You truly are a natural in writing...

    The heart can't lie... Truth is... I love you!!!

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