God's Story

shadowrulz · Apr 12, 2008, 05:17 PM

To all my people
Those that are old
And those that are young
My son's dieing breath
has been sung

You called for his death
And chanted of lies
Too blinded to see
That I was the one
Standing beside he

Crucify Him
Crucify Him
Is what you called
And by your own beckon
Pilate had stalled

It wasn't too long
Until you got your wish
The penalty of death
For the one who
Wished to save your breath

Whipped and battered
You forced him along
Giving him the pain
You raised over years
and with many a blood stain

Every inch of sin
That you all had
Was given to my son
And he bore it
Until he was done

He carried his cross
For the your own sake
He gathered the last
Of the strength he had
And saved all your past

With his dieing breath
He gave it away
For with his end
I did one thing
Your souls I began to mend

Because you called
For the Death of a Savior
Whom stood for life
I will continue my work
Without drawing any knife

My Son was brave for giving up all for you
You all were not with placing so much blame
And he will be remembered in the end
for Greater love has no one than this
Than to lay down one’s life for his friends.

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So peeps Tell me what you think!

Apr 12, 2008, 05:17 PM	#1 (permalink)
shadowrulz Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: the sign says "in a black hole". Is that even possible?!?! Posts: 351 Thanks: 4 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Credits: 4,899	God's Story To all my people Those that are old And those that are young My son's dieing breath has been sung You called for his death And chanted of lies Too blinded to see That I was the one Standing beside he Crucify Him Crucify Him Is what you called And by your own beckon Pilate had stalled It wasn't too long Until you got your wish The penalty of death For the one who Wished to save your breath Whipped and battered You forced him along Giving him the pain You raised over years and with many a blood stain Every inch of sin That you all had Was given to my son And he bore it Until he was done He carried his cross For the your own sake He gathered the last Of the strength he had And saved all your past With his dieing breath He gave it away For with his end I did one thing Your souls I began to mend Because you called For the Death of a Savior Whom stood for life I will continue my work Without drawing any knife My Son was brave for giving up all for you You all were not with placing so much blame And he will be remembered in the end for Greater love has no one than this Than to lay down one’s life for his friends. ---------------------------------------------- So peeps Tell me what you think! __________________ COME JOIN IN THE FUN OF THE GREAT EPIC TALE OF FANTASY!!!!
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