Thread: Her struggle

good poem.
I'm a fan of Assonance Consonance and alliteration.

Bent, beaten, and broken.
She lays limp and still

So I particularly enjoyed these two lines.
You also have a few profound statements in here and a wonderful contrast between the start and the finish.
Start.

For heaven sent.
In heaven no more.
Just crushed.
Damned into the floor.

This idea of her father creating hell on earth for her. (the torture and pain)
contrasted with...

To heaven you will go,
and there you will stay.
To hell will go your father
for taking your life away.

Contrasted with this idea of heaven actually existing outside our real world perspective (the one you adopted at the first) and that the father is really going to be the one to suffer for his actions.

I can only hope that this wasn't actually inspired by a real event for you, because if it was, I'll have exceeded even my own ignorance in posting a some-what objective appreciation for your work.
Which I like a lot.