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    If he is my hero then why is he gone
    If he is to help me when I am down
    Then why is not here
    He was supposed to rescue me along time ago

    But he never came what a shame
    He was no hero he was a coward
    Hidden in the shadows of pity
    He is nothing more then a fake

    He was no "Knight in Shining Armour"
    He was a dud nothing more then a mere man tin foil
    Hidden in a mask of lies
    But if he was my hero he would be here
    But he is not so he is no hero

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    Re: He's Not My Hero

    i loved it. it was a great way of words, and ive never been any prince my self, but shame on that guy!

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    Nice. It's a good thing Im not that type of guy. I could'nt help but laugh at your siggy. lol.


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    wow it's nice,i liked this part you made the most

    If he is my hero then why is he gone
    If he is to help me when I am down
    Then why is not here
    He was supposed to rescue me along time ago
    by the way..you have many great poems that you posted that i like..continue the great work.^_^
    sometimes i wish i never existed
    -heartless.DY-025

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    Re: He's Not My Hero

    i loved it. it was a great way of words, and ive never been any prince my self, but shame on that guy!
    Yeah shame on that guy...but I wrote this poem from my mother feelings you could say...a guy treated her wrong and this is how she felt.

    Nice. It's a good thing Im not that type of guy. I could'nt help but laugh at your siggy. lol.
    Yeah that is a good thing.....thank you I saw that in my pictures and I had to have it as my sig lol.

    wow it's nice,i liked this part you made the most

    If he is my hero then why is he gone
    If he is to help me when I am down
    Then why is not here
    He was supposed to rescue me along time ago

    by the way..you have many great poems that you posted that i like..continue the great work.^_^
    Thank you so much....I hope to read some of your poems in the future.

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