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    Holidays POTM (New Years' Eve)

    You stop and stare
    the windows are glistening.
    There is stuff every where
    and everyone around is singing.

    There are flakes upon the ground
    of cold crystallized white ice
    They dance when the wind blows
    and you can't help but to dive into them not once, but twice.

    The sun seems to hide
    behind clouds so bold
    to keep this wonderful sight
    nice and white and cold.

    The year is at its end
    and those 364 days are all gone
    and changes are to be planed and made
    before those last 24 hours are done.

    Everyone crowds into the street
    to watch what will be the beginning of a new year,
    and when the time comes
    They can't help but to drink, laugh, and cheer.

    New Years Eve happens
    but once out of every year.
    It allows for new plans
    and changes to appear.

    Enjoy those last few moments
    and grab that one you love dear
    and kiss them on the lips
    just at the beginning of that new year.



    That is a holiday right? xD
    P.s. Who won the collaboration contest.
    Just wondering. I haven't been able to get into the Forum for some time now. The site logs me out just as I log in @.@.


    HAPPY HOLIDAYS EVERYONE AND MERRY CHRISTMAS!

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    Re: Holidays POTM (New Years' Eve)

    A good piece even though it be a bit lengthy. Your use of Rhyme over such a prolonged period is excellent. I will probably read this at the start of new year.

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    Re: Holidays POTM (New Years' Eve)

    Quote Originally Posted by beast View Post
    A good piece even though it be a bit lengthy. Your use of Rhyme over such a prolonged period is excellent. I will probably read this at the start of new year.
    Lol why? it wont get any better if you read it then. it will have the same meaning as now.

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    Re: Holidays POTM (New Years' Eve)

    Indeed it will have the same meaning but I will probably read other things into it on the actual new year. But it is quite correct in saying that you can read it anytime. and I do read your stuff whenever I have some down time.

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