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    Horror

    Hmm... I hope I'm not too late... It's not in my clock... still half an hour 'till November If I am too late just move this to simple poem forum please? ^^

    i hope I'm not too late to enter... I'm not by my time it's still half an hour 'till

    I look up to where we stood before
    I look up to from where we fell
    I see nothing but pitch black dark
    I feel only the pulse in my head…
    Throbbing… Repeating… Hurting…

    I call out your name
    I hear no answer
    I hear only the wind outside shouting
    And something like sound breathing…
    Quiet… Shallow… Pain…

    I stand up and try to walk
    A few steps and I fall again
    I call your name again
    I feel flesh, I feel something moving…
    Crawling… Creeping… Biting…

    Just as for a curse, some light shines again
    A shout breaks out of my mouth
    A view of the highest horror-
    The body of a man dead long ago…
    Rotting… Resolving… Alone…

    The door… my only escape
    Don’t look back, go on, go on
    Open the door! Don’t look back
    I feel the man behind me…
    Breathing… Steps… Touch!

    The doors break open
    I fall, I look back-
    There’s nothing…
    Steps. Where are they coming from?
    Closer… Louder… Colder…

    I run towards the closest door
    I still must find him...
    I can see a shadow coming closer
    I shout and smash at the door…
    Pain… Pulse… Shadow…

    It touches my shoulder…
    I turn around and kick and scream...
    It grabs me, it pulls me close
    It’s cold touch taking me over,
    The shallow, slow breathing hitting my neck
    “Shh… it’s me…”

    I cry… What a feeling it is…
    My horror is gone,
    Let the hot tears flow, take away the pain
    Let me hold him tight and forget of the horror of this night…
    A Halloween turned bad because of a crack in the floor
    Last edited by Lasura; Nov 01, 2007 at 01:47 AM.

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Horror

    You are late No Still ..we have Time..
    Let me start and say ..this poem awesome and really Nice flow there ..
    Is that a bout Halloween ..Yeah ..*Happy Halloween*...^^

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    Re: Horror

    wow that poem was great lasura your so good hope to see more from you and i cant wait to see more

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    Re: Horror

    Thank you xxoxx and mveli!!!!!! ^^ I'm glad you liked it, I tried my best.. the best I can do without real inspiration.... ^^

    Yes it is about Halloween... kinda two people go into an emty house and smash through the floor suddenly... and you see what happens with the girl. Yes, she finds a dead body there... Probably some beggar, they'll have to call police now and do stuff I bet... lol ^^ Sorry- that was my imagination working again.

    Thank you both again!!!! ^^ Hugs!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Horror

    Ooh.. very interesting.. love the flow and the suspence to it... gah very nice indeed
    ^^

    Good luck to ya ^^

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    Yay!!!! ^^ It has suspence? That's great to hear (it was the only thing I thought could pull this poem through )

    Thank You Ray ^^ I'm glad you find it good... And good luck to you too :P (I don't need luck, because I'm not aiming to win :P, I'm just having fun and some training with writing about a given theme)

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Horror

    I love it! You should write scary stuff more often!

    You said you missed seeing my work. I haven't dissapeared... only faded a little.
    But what about you........ where have you been?
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Horror

    I'm trying, I'm trying- my imagination works quite good actually, but I just can't seem to put it in words. I don't think I managed to do it here too... But I'm trying and maybe with time

    I didn't have net and I only just now came back from South Africa I'm sure I'll be totaly active here for quite some time now, trying to start writing again and making sigs... It has faded in my memory a bit

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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