I like the opening of the poem, and just like any other truth eveything starts with conversation. it's like she didn't give you a choice on how you felt on this one though like she put you in a trance. but over all it's a short beautiful poem. I also like how it flowed not really following conventional way of writing. this one is beautiful CorvusImparting intimate ideas in innocence,
Mastering me, making man move.