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![]() | Immortal Vegeance(May 09 Entry) A man was inloved in a lovely lady but refuses to loved him The man was madly inloved in the lovely lady The man thinks of a way to return the refusal of the lovely lady In great love and Agony the man has a plan to kill the lovely lady The lovely lady found this and prepared for it The man is going to the lovely lady's house,the man brings a sword to stabbed the lovely lady When the man sees the lovely lady he immediately drew out the sword but the lovely lady shot him and fell in the stairs Before the man died the man said his lasts and cursed words "Unto refusal of my love to you, you will suffer in eternal Agony of my love to you and every man that fall in love with you will DIE! you will no born no child nor sons nor daughters your life will be sad and nothing to live for, Because the only you love is me!"and died In desperation and scared in the curse the lovely lady hide herself in the deepest part of forest to hide the curse of his lover
__________________ I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying.... I loved my GF... |
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![]() ![]() ![]() | Re: Immortal Vegeance(May 09 Entry) yeah... I just don't know.... there are aspects of fairness which began to deplete after one entry. That is because one is enough. Besides... when you start entering more, you take away from yourself. It's like you're weakening your first entry just by putting this here. 2 entries + POTM = BAD. .....but im not a mod or anything, thats just my opinion......
__________________ am i the baddest?SHO'NUFF am i the prettiest? SHO'NUFF *KISS MY CONVERSE* Last edited by Peach_follows; May 14, 2009 at 11:14 PM. |
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![]() | Re: Immortal Vegeance(May 09 Entry) Thanks I know this gonna ruin my first entry and I don't think to consult it to read before I post it here.
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