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    April 27, 2010, 12:32 AM

    Maybe I should word this "poetic like".
    With dramatic breaks.
    And maybe I will force feed you a rhyme...
    ...until it aches.
    we're all a bunch of fakes.
    And this is just pathetic.
    JWH-018 feels just like pot,
    But it's synthetic.
    Ok. okay. Do you know what string theory is?
    It's a theory that at a sub-atomic level....
    beyond the protons and neutrons of a nucleus...
    there are little tiny strings of energy that make up all
    of
    everything.
    And we're just on a giant membrane that we cant escape from.
    And closer to us than the clothes on our skin...
    ..there's a parallel universe.
    Like slices in a loaf of bread.
    Screw rhyming. I'm hungry now.
    These thoughts.
    these thoughts.
    thoughts
    are completely unoriginal....
    stuff I watched on a documentary.
    thoughts are things

    April 27, 2010, 1:04 AM

    I just fell asleep with my wireless keyboard.

    April 27, 2010 1:27 AM

    I just got out the shower.
    I am naked and dripping, but I made this a priority.
    I never feel clean enough.
    I am chewing a wad of toilet paper... but its clean.
    I have pica. Google it.
    I am cold.
    I better find some pajamas.

    April 27, 2010. 2:19 AM

    Still wondering why equinn wrote a journal about not being able to take planes on boats.
    But, I didn't read it yet.
    Still chewing that toilet paper... I swallowed a little.
    But at least I have clothes on.
    Still, I contemplate joining a Masonic lodge.
    But I know this poem is too long.

    April 27, 2010, 9:51 AM

    That last line didn't make any sense.
    So, I decided I wasn't done.
    Now it REALLY doesn't make sense.
    So I figured I should edit it.
    But it can't be an invisible shade of gray
    So I guess I'll have to live with it.
    Last edited by Peach_follows; Apr 27, 2010 at 07:59 AM.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Invisable diary

    sorry if the color was part of the poem but if I can't read it then it has to be changed.


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    Re: Invisable diary

    I read it..... confused I am.... All I have to say to this poem is WHAT THE F--K IS GOING ON! AH HA HA HA HA I don't understand it at all because... 1. It doesn't at all make sense. 2. why is it in journal entries? I thought the poem was to be about insanity not how the writer is insane when they wrote it.... I say that because that's just how it seems. No offense.. I suppose. but again WTF!?!?!?! Peach you are crazy!

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    Re: Invisable diary

    Aw, but now its not invisible Might as well edit the title too... I spelled it wrong anyway. How about.... "April 27".. ???

    @starfire...

    At least now I will be able to vote.
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    Re: Invisable diary

    I like your use of anaphor and the fact that you used the fact you have pica disorder.

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    Re: Invisable diary

    Lol you did it just to vote? BAH HA HA. goof ball :P

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    Re: Invisable diary

    Naw... I didn't write it just to vote... I put a lot of thought into the concept (just not the actual writing, which... was part of the concept I suppose).
    It was intentionally written during wee hours, and made to reflect my thoughts at those moments (my lack of sanity).

    But I do know... even if everyone fails to see where I was going with it. I still have earned my opportunity to vote
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    Re: Invisable diary

    that is true. And I don't understand it haha.. oh well.

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