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Reply With Quotekingmustang (Apr 29, 2010)
April 27, 2010, 12:32 AM
Maybe I should word this "poetic like".
With dramatic breaks.
And maybe I will force feed you a rhyme...
...until it aches.
we're all a bunch of fakes.
And this is just pathetic.
JWH-018 feels just like pot,
But it's synthetic.
Ok. okay. Do you know what string theory is?
It's a theory that at a sub-atomic level....
beyond the protons and neutrons of a nucleus...
there are little tiny strings of energy that make up all
of
everything.
And we're just on a giant membrane that we cant escape from.
And closer to us than the clothes on our skin...
..there's a parallel universe.
Like slices in a loaf of bread.
Screw rhyming. I'm hungry now.
These thoughts.
these thoughts.
thoughts
are completely unoriginal....
stuff I watched on a documentary.
thoughts are things
April 27, 2010, 1:04 AM
I just fell asleep with my wireless keyboard.
April 27, 2010 1:27 AM
I just got out the shower.
I am naked and dripping, but I made this a priority.
I never feel clean enough.
I am chewing a wad of toilet paper... but its clean.
I have pica. Google it.
I am cold.
I better find some pajamas.
April 27, 2010. 2:19 AM
Still wondering why equinn wrote a journal about not being able to take planes on boats.
But, I didn't read it yet.
Still chewing that toilet paper... I swallowed a little.
But at least I have clothes on.
Still, I contemplate joining a Masonic lodge.
But I know this poem is too long.
April 27, 2010, 9:51 AM
That last line didn't make any sense.
So, I decided I wasn't done.
Now it REALLY doesn't make sense.
So I figured I should edit it.
But it can't be an invisible shade of gray
So I guess I'll have to live with it.
Last edited by Peach_follows; Apr 27, 2010 at 07:59 AM.
... Not Ever Again...
kingmustang (Apr 29, 2010)
sorry if the color was part of the poem but if I can't read it then it has to be changed.
I read it..... confused I am.... All I have to say to this poem is WHAT THE F--K IS GOING ON! AH HA HA HA HA I don't understand it at all because... 1. It doesn't at all make sense. 2. why is it in journal entries? I thought the poem was to be about insanity not how the writer is insane when they wrote it.... I say that because that's just how it seems. No offense.. I suppose. but again WTF!?!?!?! Peach you are crazy!
Peach_follows (Apr 27, 2010)
Aw, but now its not invisibleMight as well edit the title too... I spelled it wrong anyway. How about.... "April 27".. ???
@starfire...
At least now I will be able to vote.
... Not Ever Again...
I like your use of anaphor and the fact that you used the fact you have pica disorder.
Lol you did it just to vote? BAH HA HA. goof ball :P
Naw... I didn't write it just to vote... I put a lot of thought into the concept (just not the actual writing, which... was part of the concept I suppose).
It was intentionally written during wee hours, and made to reflect my thoughts at those moments (my lack of sanity).
But I do know... even if everyone fails to see where I was going with it. I still have earned my opportunity to vote
... Not Ever Again...
that is true. And I don't understand it haha.. oh well.
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