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Sep 28, 2007, 10:03 PM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Bergen County, NJ
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 Credits: 6,148 | Journey's End (Homocidal Suicide) I had always known That fateful day would come Not everyone got killed by them But there were always some From when I was born I felt their iron grip I felt my parents blood on me I felt them slowly slip Their so sacred rites They would make you learn If you tried to block them out They'd come and make you burn Even as a man You always lived in fear You always walked a careful walk You heard with a cautious ear But still I knew, no matter what One day that this would be I'd walk over the highest cliff To finally be free And when i looked down on that ground I seemed to realize It was they, not me, who did this To traitors in their eyes My suicide... Their murder.... Thought my only crime.... Even so... I had always known That fateful day would come Not everyone got killed by them But there were always some
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Sep 29, 2007, 01:45 AM
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  1 )3^^( )N  Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better...
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Credits: 58,560 | Re: Journey's End (Merciless Suicide) woah... this is dark.. @.@ nicely done.. and yes i agree with this stanza... "I had always known That fateful day would come Not everyone got killed by them But there were always some" nicely done... good work..  and good luck to ya ^^ |
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Sep 30, 2007, 06:26 PM
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| Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Bergen County, NJ
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Credits: 6,148 | Re: Journey's End (Merciless Suicide) Thanks! I wanted mine to be different from the other entries. This is gonna be a tough competition..., but good luck to you too.
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Oct 02, 2007, 07:57 AM
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 Upcoming Legend  Join Date: May 2007 Location: Crystal Minnesota.
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Credits: 11,232 | Re: Journey's End (Merciless Suicide) This was really interesting. I liked it alot. Oh Oh oh...and, your avatar and isg rock my socks. <3 for death note.
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