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    Journey's End {Day's End} POTM Sept. 07

    Journey's End {Day's End}

    Avoidance is critical to me.
    It helps give me the strength I need to get through the day.
    At least that’s the way I choose to see it.

    I try to awake early to avoid the alarm.
    I get out of bed and walk across the floor,
    trying and hoping to avoid making a sound or creating a problem as I begin my day.

    I try to avoid thinking as ridiculous as it sounds.
    If I can stop my thoughts my weaknesses won't show.
    I can avoid thinking about what I am, who I am, and where I am.
    If I allow these thoughts, I feel as if I'm swallowed whole.

    I keep my head down when a task is at hand, to avoid distraction.
    Truly it’s to avoid interaction.
    Each day I do these things never changing, my memories blur into one.

    Eventually I take notice that I'm all alone.
    Nothing distracting in my mind, I've avoided long enough this day.
    That part of my body has given up.
    I can begin to relax no longer on guard.

    Is fear why I avoid?
    I don't think so, its just who I am.
    So with the only light the glow of my clock,
    I close my eyes and sigh, for I have avoided another day of living.
    This day’s journey's ended.
    I BELONG TO AN ANGEL NOW!

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    Re: Journey's End {Day's End} POTM Sept. 07

    Eekk.. @.@ sounds like a robot's life.. sheesh.. *shivers* na ah.. dont wanna be that lonely~! @.@

    Nice poem btw... nicely done ^^ and the way u potrayed ur days is really nice.. like it ^^

    Good luck..

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    Re: Journey's End {Day's End} POTM Sept. 07

    I can understand what you are portraying in your poem. While reading your poem it reminds me of my life and how I live it. Your poem was nicely written. Keep up with the good work. If you need anyone to talk to I'm here just pm me.

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    Re: Journey's End {Day's End} POTM Sept. 07

    I love the poem. I know how you feel. Kinda like me at times. Great job keep up the good work.

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    Re: Journey's End {Day's End} POTM Sept. 07

    I really like how you took "Journey's End" and turned it into wanting that ending moment so bad, that you'd avoid everything up until then.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Journey's End {Day's End} POTM Sept. 07

    Yanno... I really like this poem. I identify with the....avoiding thought thing. The numbness is starting to set in for me and I find it rather comforting. Part of me still finds that really sad. So, this poem touched a soft spot with me. Very well written.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: Journey's End {Day's End} POTM Sept. 07

    Thanks I guess everyone. @_@

    After this has sat here for a while, I wish I hadn't written it. I feel weird about it now.
    I BELONG TO AN ANGEL NOW!

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    Re: Journey's End {Day's End} POTM Sept. 07

    Well you shouldn't it was very well written. Besides it might of been the way that you felt at the time but don't ever doubt yourself. Your good at what you do, keep it up.

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