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    Re: Journey's End {Day's End} POTM Sept. 07

    Generally speaking its a really good poem, but what i don't get is why would try to avoid things in life if you're living it every day. It's sound like you're in your own little world doing what you're suppose to do on your day to day life while at the same time, avoiding and (sounds like) ignoring the outside world. Just so nobody can see the true feelings you have inside.
    its kinda like me in sense, except when somebody does something that i dont like, i tell them know how i feel,and having no regrets i hold nothing back.

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    Re: Journey's End {Day's End} POTM Sept. 07

    Thats kind of (to me) boring.To me poems are just like stories that are supposed to have i dont know action........... oh well dont mind me im really dumb in that sort of thing you know judging..........but wonderful,
    i loved the whole idea.its a great poem.
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    Re: Journey's End {Day's End} POTM Sept. 07

    darn good poem makes mine look like crap now that i think on it ... ill just hafta try a little harder


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