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    Journey's End (Homocidal Suicide)

    I had always known
    That fateful day would come
    Not everyone got killed by them
    But there were always some


    From when I was born
    I felt their iron grip
    I felt my parents blood on me
    I felt them slowly slip

    Their so sacred rites
    They would make you learn
    If you tried to block them out
    They'd come and make you burn

    Even as a man
    You always lived in fear
    You always walked a careful walk
    You heard with a cautious ear

    But still I knew, no matter what
    One day that this would be
    I'd walk over the highest cliff
    To finally be free

    And when i looked down on that ground
    I seemed to realize
    It was they, not me, who did this
    To traitors in their eyes

    My suicide...
    Their murder....
    Thought my only crime....
    Even so...


    I had always known
    That fateful day would come
    Not everyone got killed by them
    But there were always some
    Last edited by ILikeApples5520; Sep 30, 2007 at 06:24 PM.


    Thanks to _gwenibe_ for this awesome sig!

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    Re: Journey's End (Merciless Suicide)

    woah... this is dark.. @.@ nicely done.. and yes i agree with this stanza...

    "I had always known
    That fateful day would come
    Not everyone got killed by them
    But there were always some"


    nicely done... good work.. and good luck to ya ^^

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    Re: Journey's End (Merciless Suicide)

    Thanks!

    I wanted mine to be different from the other entries.

    This is gonna be a tough competition..., but good luck to you too.


    Thanks to _gwenibe_ for this awesome sig!

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    Re: Journey's End (Merciless Suicide)

    This was really interesting. I liked it alot.
    Oh Oh oh...and, your avatar and isg rock my socks. <3 for death note.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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