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    Journey's End - September 07

    Such gastly incisions of unknown origin
    burning as I walk near such an unholy land,
    where demons sit and ghosts walk,
    where the trees dance and eat the flesh of the air,
    where a lone girl sits along the fence;
    I stare and become intranced walking ever closer.
    suddenly darkness [falls] to the earth
    and incisions burn with unattainable hurt
    and pain becomes crimson.
    the girl smiles and stands to her feet.
    she speaks with such unknown tounge
    and I in return speak the unknown.
    with [anger] in her eyes
    she forms to something so undiscribable.
    It spews such violence from it's mouth
    as I stand and smile as it screams at me,
    and when it is done I speak the unknown.
    slowly it forms to it's gentalish state,
    incisions flowing with blood but pain unheard of,
    she smiles and vanishes as dust in the wind.
    I faint to life or reality with only scars remaining
    unable to tell if the journey was real or a dream




    9-2-07
    I've been writing all day so I figured why not
    Last edited by Darkened_Star; Sep 02, 2007 at 01:38 PM.

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    Hmm..i think i just saw the most probable winning poem here.. @.@ very high chance of winning... Powerful words...high vocabulary...and nice description...damn i need a dictionary...Nicely dark

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    Dark poem, very dark poem.
    but this is a shoe in for the (poem of the month) comp.
    so good luck to ya.

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    that was a very dark poem, but very beautiful. this poem has to win for poem of the month!! =)

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    Re: Journey's End - September 07

    i love the poem good work alot of emotions shown through out the poem
    very good ^^ keep it ↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥
    Yeah, Bye.

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