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    Journey's End - September 07

    Ahem. 9-2-07 *snaps fingers*

    JOURNEY'S END

    At the end of the line
    Some might call fine
    As demons come to dine
    On all our flesh divine

    Summon your courage
    Young heroes of bold
    This is the end
    Of this long story told

    This is finality
    This is fidelity
    This is eternity
    This is the destination

    Brave heroes
    Your struggle ends
    Here and now
    As your lives now fade

    There is no life for you
    There is no honor for you
    There is no glory for you
    There is nothing for you

    All you know is gone
    Your life is fading
    And now there's nothing
    But the darkness of emptyness

    What is this feeling
    It is warm
    It smells good
    What is it?

    This is my blood
    I have fallen
    This is my death
    Impossible

    You still fight
    Even though you are dead
    Dead as a rock
    And yet you continue

    I am dieing
    How is this
    The end of the tunnel
    I can see it

    Thank you
    Young heroes
    You have saved not only me
    But you have saved the world

    My journey is over
    Young heroes of bold
    But yours is just beginning
    Make sure it stays told.
    Last edited by shadowrulz; Sep 05, 2007 at 03:15 PM.

    A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!

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    Re: Final Destination

    Wow this poem was really sad.....*tears up a little* and somewhat scary but anyways I loved it shadow you did awsome on describing and I loved reading it!^^



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    Re: Final Destination

    I was afraid I was going too much into detail. I didn't want it to seem too one track.

    A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!

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    Re: Final Destination

    no it was a perfect balance I really hope you win because this is winning material I absolutely loved it!^^



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    Re: Final Destination

    very good sad and kinda scary,but very good job anyways i loved it rock on dude!!!keep it ↑ cant wait for more good emotions btw
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: Final Destination

    I really liked this one too. But dude, It's gotta have the title, Journey's End. It's definitely along the theme, but it's gotta be your poem's title.


    Thanks to _gwenibe_ for this awesome sig!

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    Re: Final Destination

    Thanks. I had fogotten about that. I couldn't come up with an appropriate title anyway. Final Destination didn't make much sense anyway. lol. That just made that part easier.

    A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!

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    Re: Final Destination

    nice poem. I really like it.
    and it is a bit sad but very good and enjoyable.

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