Journey's End - September 07
As the journy begins things start off
new and unexpected the sun rising on a new day
the fresh air brings forth new ideas and more smile's.
Wind brushing the cheek , children
playing a familiar game once played
by you when you were young , you
look to an open field with wild flowers.
Chirping birds and barking dogs
you think on things as you look
around to see the world so dim
Always wondering if things could be better
for everyone like they are fro your self , never
realizing your just dreaming , and the real world
is more cruel than you thought.
A waking dream that grows cold never
thinking of of your dream could be something
more but you let it fade as you get from bed and go about
your real day of avoiding things.
Why must you keep dreaming , when the world
around you i so black wake up and smell the coffee
my friend because the longer you dream the worse
the realty when you come to.
At journys end things you realise that
even with all the bad and uglyness the real
world offers it is still something you can control
and make it the way you want be it giving in
and doing nothing or being bold and taking a
Re: Journey's End - September 07
i love the poem good work alot of emotions shown through out the poem
very good ^^ keep it ↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥