Great poem that's makes you think. No matter how you wish the real world could sometimes be like a wonderful dream it unfortunately isn't. It just goes to show that you're the only one who make your dreams come true.
As the journy begins things start off
new and unexpected the sun rising on a new day
the fresh air brings forth new ideas and more smile's.
Wind brushing the cheek , children
playing a familiar game once played
by you when you were young , you
look to an open field with wild flowers.
Chirping birds and barking dogs
you think on things as you look
around to see the world so dim
and sad.
Always wondering if things could be better
for everyone like they are fro your self , never
realizing your just dreaming , and the real world
is more cruel than you thought.
A waking dream that grows cold never
thinking of of your dream could be something
more but you let it fade as you get from bed and go about
your real day of avoiding things.
Why must you keep dreaming , when the world
around you i so black wake up and smell the coffee
my friend because the longer you dream the worse
the realty when you come to.
At journys end things you realise that
even with all the bad and uglyness the real
world offers it is still something you can control
and make it the way you want be it giving in
and doing nothing or being bold and taking a
chance.
Last edited by HolderOfTheDarkChalice; Sep 07, 2007 at 02:23 PM. Reason: conforming to the POTM rules.
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Great poem that's makes you think. No matter how you wish the real world could sometimes be like a wonderful dream it unfortunately isn't. It just goes to show that you're the only one who make your dreams come true.
"Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
Thanks so much I love it!
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Last edited by Chiefblackhammer; Sep 07, 2007 at 12:19 PM.
i love the poem good work alot of emotions shown through out the poem
very good ^^ keep it ↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥
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