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    Journey's End - September 07

    As the journy begins things start off
    new and unexpected the sun rising on a new day
    the fresh air brings forth new ideas and more smile's.

    Wind brushing the cheek , children
    playing a familiar game once played
    by you when you were young , you
    look to an open field with wild flowers.

    Chirping birds and barking dogs
    you think on things as you look
    around to see the world so dim
    and sad.

    Always wondering if things could be better
    for everyone like they are fro your self , never
    realizing your just dreaming , and the real world
    is more cruel than you thought.

    A waking dream that grows cold never
    thinking of of your dream could be something
    more but you let it fade as you get from bed and go about
    your real day of avoiding things.

    Why must you keep dreaming , when the world
    around you i so black wake up and smell the coffee
    my friend because the longer you dream the worse
    the realty when you come to.

    At journys end things you realise that
    even with all the bad and uglyness the real
    world offers it is still something you can control
    and make it the way you want be it giving in
    and doing nothing or being bold and taking a
    chance.
    Last edited by HolderOfTheDarkChalice; Sep 07, 2007 at 02:23 PM. Reason: conforming to the POTM rules.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Dreaming!

    Great poem that's makes you think. No matter how you wish the real world could sometimes be like a wonderful dream it unfortunately isn't. It just goes to show that you're the only one who make your dreams come true.
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    Re: Dreaming!

    Please read the September POTM guidelines and make adjustments, this won't qualify for judging otherwise.
    Last edited by Chiefblackhammer; Sep 07, 2007 at 12:19 PM.


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    Re: Journey's End - September 07

    i love the poem good work alot of emotions shown through out the poem
    very good ^^ keep it ↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥
    Yeah, Bye.

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