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    Journeys end - wayward friendship.

    I'm sorry to be blunt.
    I'm sorry to be mean.
    Even if it hurts your self-esteem.

    I just can't hurt like this anymore.
    I can't let you all do it.
    Put me down on the floor.

    You didn't Lose me to someone else.
    You had your chance.
    It's not my fault you chose yourself.

    I begged and I pleaded.
    I told you everything, and more.
    I constantly told you what I needed.

    Yeah I said you had another chance.
    You now know how hard it is,
    To be lonely, it hits the heart like a lance.

    It's not Him over You.
    You had your chance,
    For a year or two!

    After everything I have to deal with NOW,
    I have to sit and ask myself,
    My friend can push this on me, How?!

    My closest, my heart, my confident.
    You know how hard,
    And painful my time is now spent.

    And you have nerve to get upset,
    Knowing the agony and the strain.
    When my energy is all otherwise spent?

    I'm trying so hard to hold on to me myself and I.
    It's not even for me, it's for family.
    Because I couldn't do it, I couldn't try;

    To put myself before my mother,
    Or my siblings and their happy home.
    Even though my "grip" left with another.

    Another life that was lost to me.
    Maybe it's time to set you free.
    Because maybe it wasn't meant to be.

    It must be too much for you to be my friend,
    But I understand, and won't hold it against you,
    It's becoming apparent to me, that this is the end.
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    If this isn't close enough to the topic I apologize. But . . . this is what I felt like when I read the theme for this month, and recent events in my life have re-enforced that. I hope you enjoy either way.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: Journeys end - wayward friendship.

    umm my.. i think i just lost my chance of winning there?

    This is good... like always u come up with such masterpiece.. this is much different than others of urs.. different style...

    Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!!
    I'm BACK AO!
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    Re: Journeys end - wayward friendship.

    I donno about that. I didn't read the others entrys first. Because when I do that I feel like my poem sounds like everyone elses. And I didn't want that.

    I'm glad you like it. I don't ever feel really proud of most of my work, I'm my bigist critic after all. It really is different because I feel different then normal. And it's certianly longer then most of my work. I'm really glad you appriciate it. THanks.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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