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Thread: June - POTM Politics [Winner = Sazzy]

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    June - POTM Politics [Winner = Sazzy]

    HolderOfTheDarkChalice
    Quote Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice View Post
    Things that pass seem like a memory and
    things to come are just thoughts that havnt
    been made , all the laughs and the tears that
    make up a life are sometimes to short to be loved
    or even missed.

    When a baby is born the tears that it cries brings
    joy to a new mothers heart its a memory that
    will always be new no matter how old the child is,
    love is a wonderful killer because there's so much
    to have the pain and the joy that makes the day worth it
    will always be in her heart.

    Today a man died for glory and pride so that others
    could live there dreams , doesn't matter if there bad dreams
    or good dreams because its a dream that everyone has ,
    things that pass like the moment is the last , how fortunate
    we are to dream.

    Oh the politics of it all makes the dream well worth it no
    matter who makes the call they could be young , old and the people
    in between they all have there dreams and thats what makes this
    country rare.
    beast
    Quote Originally Posted by beast View Post
    Fire plumes like Heaven’s flair, birds at flesh tear.
    To the sky, unfocused the dead eyes stare.
    Powerful men push peace and care aside.
    The young fight first when battalions collide.
    Only fools rejoice at news of warfare.

    The heart has no room for mercy anywhere.
    Hate eclipses a desire for what is fair.
    Victims body counts rise for someone’s pride.
    Fire plumes like Heaven’s flair.

    So murder goes on though none seem to care.
    Wives wait for men who will never be there.
    The Earth at the desert, with red tears, cried.
    Creativity makes madness its bride.
    Corpses keep the dunes from becoming bare.
    Fire plumes like Heaven’s flair.

    /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
    I dedicate this to Dilon, Gangzekowski and all the other members of the 75th regiment who ranged out and never returned.
    (Politics June entry)
    PhoenixSara
    Quote Originally Posted by PhoenixSara View Post
    I have been fighting so long,
    now she is back.
    She says things to make me believe.
    Now she intends to relive
    All my pain and anxiety,
    All my hurt and disdain.

    So many speeches given.
    So many promises not kept.
    All just so my brothers will not suspect.
    She wants her power,
    She wants all that it can give.

    Now the nest of her citizenry,
    Is all but a garbage dump.
    Of lies, Of deceit
    Of all that is vain.
    All her promises, all her votes were given in vain.

    My brothers march in the streets.
    Some of them givng up their lives.
    Yet not enough for a consensus
    Of making her admit her lies.

    " I am sorry." she said in the news.
    Is she sorry i wonder?
    For all the lives that she took.
    Is she sorry for the child who begs in the streets.
    Is she sorry for the homeless, who has no home to keep.
    Is she sorry for the widow who's husband her police abducted?
    All for those words she said never meaning a thing.

    I know I am just a voice ,
    shouting in vain.
    Trying to find justice,
    Trying to reach my aim.
    As i walk to the streets.
    The snippers take aim.
    As I fall to the ground wounded
    I wonder will she be sorry,
    Will i die in vain.
    receiverofhell
    Quote Originally Posted by receiverofhell View Post
    Rulers of Nations scattered around the world
    In the world of Pilitics many rise and fall
    Politicians are the creators of law envoy of justice and slayers of injustice
    They make laws to protect to protect us and to pursue the world PEACE!

    But it seems these laws aren't obeyed by themseleves
    Global Depression in the past and now Global Recession...
    What's next to this? A strike/boycott protests civil war or A WORLD WAR!?

    Many lives are sacrificed but nothing is done to assure their so called WORLD PEACE!
    But the lives that are sacrificed for equality is put to nothing or anything at all
    Today politicians are the ones who breaks the lawas they make
    Many Politicians today are like a powerful corrupted supreme reigning Tyrants TODAY!

    Let's fight for our freedom and to to right what is wrong
    Let's fight for equality of justice law etc...
    Let's band together to ensure equalities of justice laws freedom of speech freedom to write and the rights of people

    We need someone to put to end those Long reigning corrupted Tyrants seated in thrones to gain our freedom
    We need soemone or group to slay them all for once and for all!
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    This no racism and I have good thing making this one.....
    Alot of things happen this pasts years...
    I have a good reason on making this one........
    I got caried away while I'm making this poem and this I came up with...
    I did this in midnight..
    TaurusDemon23
    Quote Originally Posted by TaurusDemon23 View Post
    As the world turns these days
    Everyone seems so afraid.......
    Of each other,
    Themselves,
    Even just nothing in particular.

    Peace In The Middle East still a pipe dream
    A Crusade bound for failure
    Muslims, Jews, and Christians always riling things up.
    A bad joke that's never too mature
    Yet taken too seriously

    Little nation led by a crazy troll in a jumpsuit and shades,
    warped by Communism-Lite
    Playing with uranium enriched toys
    Scaring all the girls and boys.

    Eyes glued to the TV
    Paranoia lingering like a bad VD

    From devious bankers to crappy corporate bailouts,
    Who's side is our government really on?
    From them, it seems I just hear the same old song

    It gets old.

    As the weed smoke drifts from my bowl
    Gunsmoke extinguishes another soul

    How far is it all gonna go?
    Is it gonna be Ragnarok?
    Or is the world about to rock!

    I'm ready for a solution,
    Perhaps a REVOLUTION!!!!!
    Sazzy
    Quote Originally Posted by Sazzy View Post
    Always Changing

    Time we know is passing by,
    Its seen us laugh, its seen us cry.
    We've told the truth and sometimes lie,
    Till it comes for us to die.

    Remember all the memories of old,
    Secrets that are never to be told.
    A life where neighbourhoods were friends,
    Even with a chance to make amends.

    It was all so different then,
    No angry wars made by men.
    Living without all this fear,
    Or being killed from the rear.

    Life was filled with joy and laughter,
    Not this tale of sorrow after.
    Where strong families are broken,
    Leaving heartfelt words unspoken.

    So why can't we all get along?
    And sing a more joyful song.
    Stop this world that we've been breaking,
    Lets start anew and get creating!

    I hope it fits the theme.... I thought I would give ago last night and this is what I came up with.
    EmoNightmareRose
    Quote Originally Posted by EmoNightmareRose View Post
    The New World we Sought and destroyed with a vengeance,
    Has been lying it's back taking it's pain and sorrow,
    And the man with the gun stands and laughs while it winces,
    Beneath his feet, hope is a small word that means tomorrow,

    Dreams that were once a staple of life among us,
    Are crushed by the solitude forces that have separated
    While the days of infamy are just crushed dust at most,
    We have forgotten the country that we knew not then was ill fated,

    The End High and Nigh,
    And it all is the ticking time bomb of broken whispers,
    Both of the screams of women and children, and all they do is cover their nose and sigh,
    Because the dead carcass that lies before them is amiss,
    Sacrifice the ones that gasp and die,

    And the man on the top of the tower,
    Hailing the blitzkrieg further,
    As a magical Dream Evil nightmarish silver symphony,
    The darkness from the falling bombs and hell fire,
    Shall shadow us forever,
    In the small empty movement,

    Where Men believe they are above the Cosmos,

    in War,

    in Fury,

    In Power.

    7 Days to vote!


    * Note starfire1036 is still banned so she/he is disqualified for this contest.


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    Re: June - POTM Politics [Voting]

    Quote Originally Posted by Chiefblackhammer View Post
    HolderOfTheDarkChalice


    beast


    PhoenixSara


    receiverofhell


    TaurusDemon23


    Sazzy


    EmoNightmareRose



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    * Note starfire1036 is still banned so she/he is disqualified for this contest.
    im not banned anymoree!!! or is it still too late :/ xD oh well i dont really care anymore... my poetry it seems is not good enough for the people on here so i doubt i will be posting in the potm anymore... when you put your heart and soul into a piece of work only to have it shot down time after time i see there no reason to continue with my "rhymes"

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    Re: June - POTM Politics [Voting]

    Quote Originally Posted by starfire1036 View Post
    im not banned anymoree!!! or is it still too late :/ xD oh well i dont really care anymore... my poetry it seems is not good enough for the people on here so i doubt i will be posting in the potm anymore... when you put your heart and soul into a piece of work only to have it shot down time after time i see there no reason to continue with my "rhymes"
    You are at your best when your writing about what you want to write about. There is still the poetry forum and you always dominated that.

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    Re: June - POTM Politics [Voting]

    Quote Originally Posted by starfire1036 View Post
    im not banned anymoree!!! or is it still too late :/ xD oh well i dont really care anymore... my poetry it seems is not good enough for the people on here so i doubt i will be posting in the potm anymore... when you put your heart and soul into a piece of work only to have it shot down time after time i see there no reason to continue with my "rhymes"

    The deadline was June 30th, you were still banned as of yesterday so I am sorry but I can't allow your entry. As far as your poetry, you are an idiot (that isn't an insult as much as a smack to the face for a wake up call). If your poetry needs the approval of others then you are writing for the WRONG reason.

    If you love to write then write, enter contests and others will notice. Write for others approval and they will notice that too...just not in the way you will want them to.

    I love to write poetry but I couldn't careless if others understand or appreciate it. Sure everyone wants to be recognized for the skill and talent they have but to a real poet or writer that might not ever come or maybe just not in their life time or maybe they get a lot of attention now but fade away over time. Which is why you should write for you, the sharing and their opinion on your work... is a perk.


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    Re: June - POTM Politics [Voting]

    Quote Originally Posted by starfire1036 View Post
    im not banned anymoree!!! or is it still too late :/ xD oh well i dont really care anymore... my poetry it seems is not good enough for the people on here so i doubt i will be posting in the potm anymore... when you put your heart and soul into a piece of work only to have it shot down time after time i see there no reason to continue with my "rhymes"
    Please may I remind you that this is a voting a thread and due to reasons stated in Chiefy's post, You are not entered and I would say it is it too late seeing as the poll is all ready up.

    However, on a personal note... if you are only writing poems to be recognised then what are your poems for? Poems are heart felt emotions that are personal to you. It shouldn't make the slightest bit of difference if people don't read them. Its the fact that you expressed your feelings whether people like it or not.

    Edit - It Appear's that Chiefy has already said the same thing even though it took me a while to write it.
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    After reading through all of the poems. I really did like the uniqueness in the approaches. Although, in some of the poem's, the variations in line length broke the flow and it left me a little disappointed I should say mostly in EmoNightMare's and receiverofhell. I did like the use of religious views/references in TaurusDemon23's poem. As well as Beasts poem being a dedication. Both idea's never really came to me so its nice to see work from different angles'.

    Now the top choice's of mine are HolderOfTheDarkChalice and PhoenixSara. But my vote goes to PhoenixSara. The reference of a hateful female, just really seemed interesting and in same case's right in world. From my perspective it felt like the evil of mother nature, back to seek revenge. Thats what made it so appealing because it was so different and beautifully written.
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    Re: June - POTM Politics [Voting]

    Quote Originally Posted by starfire1036 View Post
    im not banned anymoree!!! or is it still too late :/ xD oh well i dont really care anymore... my poetry it seems is not good enough for the people on here so i doubt i will be posting in the potm anymore... when you put your heart and soul into a piece of work only to have it shot down time after time i see there no reason to continue with my "rhymes"
    i thought you were banned becuase you had multiple acounts
    and tried to cheat to win the contest , you deserved the ban you got
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: June - POTM Politics [Voting]

    The past is the past, lets not dwell on it people. On another note, the POTM needed a little drama anyways.

    I enjoyed reading everyones poems, so good job to everyone.

    Signature is a Gwenibe original.

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    Re: June - POTM Politics [Voting]

    I am happy our resident laureate is back. Besides to qoute Ric Flair "If you wanna be the man you have to beat the man.' And the cunning Starfire may have won had it of not been for a disqualification. it is great that we have one of the sites best poets back.

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