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Jan 30, 2008, 08:10 PM
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 Diamond in the Rough  | Life, Death, Rebirth - 1/30/08 From the first breath one takes Time is here to take away As a child one holds much innocence Too bad it isn't infinite As one grows purity goes Why is that.?? No one actually knows The harshness of reality starts to show Tainted by the realism of the cons & pros Choices are to be made & consequences goes along with whatever one chose Beauty can be anything from a meadow of carnations or just a concrete rose It is just that simple or just that complicated Like love which is easily hated From the weak-broken-hearted To the Dearly Beloved whose love train that has departed Everyone's end begins once life started Like in a previous line I had stated It is just that simple or just that complicated Living has much joy mixed with more strife If one can stir the two & drink up then one can swallow life When one can't swallow they choke When one drinks it all up it is no more Either way it goes one still croaks Die by suicide or live til the end of the ride It only takes one, but there are millions of ways to die If living is to die & to die is to live Dying would be higher than what it is For a person's shattered dreams "In death one shall be free" Like in a previous line I had stated It is just that simple or just that complicated One wonders what's next.?? Is there a life after death.?? With no flesh, with no skin All one has to do is be held accountable for ones' sins Wait for the judgment call For ones' soul to rise or fall Maybe one doesn't have to wait Maybe ones' energy of essence transfer & one reincarnates Again one is reborn To see another sunrise & feel the midst of the early morning But this time one isn't man Maybe ones' meaning of life has a different plan Maybe none of it is true... maybe not Maybe after one dies their body just rot To become noursihment & play a role in the "Cirlce of Life" for Mother Earth Maybe... just maybe that is ones' "rebirth" No one actually knows I guess that is how life, death, & rebirth goes A mystery in time that is forever froze For one to figure out on ones' own Like in a previous line I had stated It is just that simple or just that complicated
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Jan 31, 2008, 04:44 PM
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| Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Bergen County, NJ
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 Credits: 4,562 | Re: Life, Death, Rebirth - 1/30/08 Wow, this is one of the most descriptive and unique poems I've ever read here at AO. I've got some real competition for this POTM. Great poem and Good Luck  |
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| Diamond in the Rough | Re: Life, Death, Rebirth - 1/30/08 Quote:
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I will explain what this poem was about & where I was coming from & where I was going with this poem before this thread is locked... Just in case in the future, if anyone runs across this they won't be confused, lost or thinks it is too complicated... Of course the theme is life, death, & rebirth... In the life stanzas I was showing how innocent one person starts in the beginning & how quickly that goes away because all the impurity that surrounds the "innocent"... I also was showing how life has positive & negative "outcomes" & that the choices a person makes consequences goes along with them... I threw in the beauty of life & how it may beholds in a persons' eyes... And in life there is love in which ppl often try & find but rarely locates it, if one has/did how easily it can hide, leave, or just die out itself... The opposite of love is hate... It is just that simple or just that complicated.... Life has joy in it, but the harshness can out weigh those joys & if one can accept the both, then one can live on... If not then one will take their own life... Everyone knows that there is millions of ways to die, but it only takes one... And to live is to die means the ppl who feels shackled or a prisoner of life & in death would be free... For a persons' shattered dreams in death a person will do nothing but dream... In rebirth I was going all over the place... If one believe in heaven & hell, or reincarnation, or just doesn't believe in anything... Anyone of them can be right or not right at all ^_^  It is just that simple or just that complicated....
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