A little girl-journey's end- 09-08-07

iluvmyloser · Sep 08, 2007, 03:47 PM

A little girl sits
staring out at the woods,
waiting for a journey
to achieve at her goal.

She walks out the door
and heads out towards a tree,
soon she finds
a diamond ring.

Her journey has begun
for the search of her love
to be with him forever,
like two love ducks.
She runs into a boy
and stops and looks above,
those sparkling eyes
he's my love.

They go and get married
and raise a family,
her journey search has now ended
because she found her love.
______________

i don't know if you all like this
but i tried my best
i hope i win
wish me luck

♥~*The Princess*~♥

shadowrulz · Sep 09, 2007, 02:49 PM

Hmmm. . . It seems to be short to me. Too much. . . too the point. . . But, It still is good either way.

GL!!!

iluvmyloser · Sep 09, 2007, 03:03 PM

is that suppose to be a compliment..........oh well i dont care thank you ^-^

♥~*The Princess*~♥

!Akura13 · Sep 13, 2007, 07:09 PM

well I loved it sis good job I really hope you win keep it up!^^

Jairo · Sep 14, 2007, 07:25 AM

if you can translate this do it because ia my answer.
Esta muy bonito es directo al punto y de adonde sacaste la idea para crearlo.
its bery nice and is directly to the point, where do you get the idea to do this poem.

I love it.

*RayMe* · Sep 14, 2007, 07:27 AM

Lol ^^ that was cute..

i don't know grumpy girls make cute poems..

xD jk jk ^^ it was nice too

keep up the good work and good luck

iluvmyloser · Sep 14, 2007, 03:27 PM

gracias Jairo si te entendi ^^ i know what you ment thank you^^ i got latina blood lol
ray thank you ...what'cha talking 'bout grumpy
akura thanks thanks ^^ good luck for you too^^

thanks everyone^^

KuwiRules145 · Sep 14, 2007, 05:02 PM

Awww... it was getting so good! You should have made it longer! ^^ It would of went more excellent! But oh well this poem was still good and romantic so YAH PRINCESS!!!!! Hope to see more!

iluvmyloser · Sep 14, 2007, 06:21 PM

thank you kiwi noodle^^ thanks to everyone ^^ ♥~*The Princess*~♥

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iluvmyloser Àddïctëd tø \|ăüghïñg :) Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: ♥>>WHERE y0U WANNA bE??<<♥ Posts: 649 Thanks: 21 Thanked 15 Times in 14 Posts Credits: 10,227	A little girl-journey's end- 09-08-07 A little girl sits staring out at the woods, waiting for a journey to achieve at her goal. She walks out the door and heads out towards a tree, soon she finds a diamond ring. Her journey has begun for the search of her love to be with him forever, like two love ducks. She runs into a boy and stops and looks above, those sparkling eyes he's my love. They go and get married and raise a family, her journey search has now ended because she found her love. ______________ i don't know if you all like this but i tried my best i hope i win wish me luck ♥~The Princess~♥ __________________ ♥~Thanks Eve for this on my Bday!Bow down to your royal highness~♥ Join Animal Wonders.. <-- Click it!!!^^
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shadowrulz Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: the sign says "in a black hole". Is that even possible?!?! Posts: 371 Thanks: 4 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Credits: 6,560	Re: A little girl-journey's end- 09-08-07 Hmmm. . . It seems to be short to me. Too much. . . too the point. . . But, It still is good either way. GL!!! __________________ CLICK GOODBYE A.O.
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!Akura13 Banned Join Date: May 2007 Location: Wishing to go back to Japan... Posts: 638 Thanks: 9 Thanked 19 Times in 18 Posts Credits: 12,099	Re: A little girl-journey's end- 09-08-07 well I loved it sis good job I really hope you win keep it up!^^
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Jairo Newbie Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: San Diego Posts: 33 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,378	Re: A little girl-journey's end- 09-08-07 if you can translate this do it because ia my answer. Esta muy bonito es directo al punto y de adonde sacaste la idea para crearlo. its bery nice and is directly to the point, where do you get the idea to do this poem. I love it. __________________ La vida no es injusta, Uno es injusto con la vida. Live isn't unfair, We are unfair with Her. made by ryomakurosaki
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RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,589 Thanks: 54 Thanked 26 Times in 23 Posts Credits: 58,560	Re: A little girl-journey's end- 09-08-07 Lol ^^ that was cute.. i don't know grumpy girls make cute poems.. xD jk jk ^^ it was nice too keep up the good work and good luck __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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