Hmmm. . . It seems to be short to me. Too much. . . too the point. . . But, It still is good either way.
GL!!!
A little girl sits
staring out at the woods,
waiting for a journey
to achieve at her goal.
She walks out the door
and heads out towards a tree,
soon she finds
a diamond ring.
Her journey has begun
for the search of her love
to be with him forever,
like two love ducks.
She runs into a boy
and stops and looks above,
those sparkling eyes
he's my love.
They go and get married
and raise a family,
her journey search has now ended
because she found her love.
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i don't know if you all like this
but i tried my best
i hope i win
wish me luck
♥~*The Princess*~♥
Yeah, Bye.
Hmmm. . . It seems to be short to me. Too much. . . too the point. . . But, It still is good either way.
GL!!!
A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!
is that suppose to be a compliment..........oh well i dont care thank you ^-^
♥~*The Princess*~♥
Yeah, Bye.
if you can translate this do it because ia my answer.
Esta muy bonito es directo al punto y de adonde sacaste la idea para crearlo.
its bery nice and is directly to the point, where do you get the idea to do this poem.
I love it.
Do not dwell in the past... do not wonder about the future... just life the present to the fullness...
Lol ^^ that was cute..i don't know grumpy girls make cute poems..
xD jk jk ^^ it was nice tookeep up the good work and good luck
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gracias Jairo si te entendi ^^ i know what you ment thank you^^ i got latina blood lol
ray thank you ...what'cha talking 'bout grumpy
akura thanks thanks ^^ good luck for you too^^
thanks everyone^^
Yeah, Bye.
Awww... it was getting so good! You should have made it longer! ^^ It would of went more excellent! But oh well this poem was still good and romantic so YAH PRINCESS!!!!! Hope to see more!![]()
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