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    A little girl-journey's end- 09-08-07

    A little girl sits
    staring out at the woods,
    waiting for a journey
    to achieve at her goal.


    She walks out the door
    and heads out towards a tree,
    soon she finds
    a diamond ring.


    Her journey has begun
    for the search of her love
    to be with him forever,
    like two love ducks.

    She runs into a boy
    and stops and looks above,
    those sparkling eyes
    he's my love.


    They go and get married
    and raise a family,
    her journey search has now ended
    because she found her love.
    ______________


    i don't know if you all like this
    but i tried my best
    i hope i win
    wish me luck
    ♥~*The Princess*~♥
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: A little girl-journey's end- 09-08-07

    Hmmm. . . It seems to be short to me. Too much. . . too the point. . . But, It still is good either way.

    GL!!!

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    Re: A little girl-journey's end- 09-08-07

    is that suppose to be a compliment..........oh well i dont care thank you ^-^

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    Re: A little girl-journey's end- 09-08-07

    well I loved it sis good job I really hope you win keep it up!^^



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    Re: A little girl-journey's end- 09-08-07

    if you can translate this do it because ia my answer.
    Esta muy bonito es directo al punto y de adonde sacaste la idea para crearlo.
    its bery nice and is directly to the point, where do you get the idea to do this poem.

    I love it.
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    Re: A little girl-journey's end- 09-08-07

    Lol ^^ that was cute.. i don't know grumpy girls make cute poems..
    xD jk jk ^^ it was nice too keep up the good work and good luck

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    Re: A little girl-journey's end- 09-08-07

    gracias Jairo si te entendi ^^ i know what you ment thank you^^ i got latina blood lol
    ray thank you ...what'cha talking 'bout grumpy
    akura thanks thanks ^^ good luck for you too^^

    thanks everyone^^
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: A little girl-journey's end- 09-08-07

    Awww... it was getting so good! You should have made it longer! ^^ It would of went more excellent! But oh well this poem was still good and romantic so YAH PRINCESS!!!!! Hope to see more!
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