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    Love

    Love
    The mysterious feeling that we all share
    The feeling that is hard to describe
    in simple terms.

    Love
    The feeling that brings
    with it the feelings of
    joy and happiness that
    seem to run eternal

    Love
    The feeling you want
    to go on forever
    and ever
    until the end of time

    But that changes once
    your heart has been
    broken into pieces

    Love
    then becomes a feeling
    of despair and hatred
    No longer brings happiness
    and joy
    but only brings
    the feelings of sorrow, despair
    and misery.

    Love
    the word that makes
    us cringe
    and brings back
    horrible memories
    of sorrow and misery

    Love
    the one feeling
    I cherish more than anything

    Love
    is the feeling
    I receive from friends
    and family

    Love the one thing
    that won't disappear
    from my heart
    as along as I have
    my friends
    and my family.

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    Re: Love

    Quote Originally Posted by Descended From Darkness View Post
    Love
    then becomes a feeling
    of despair and hatred
    No longer brings happiness
    and joy
    but only brings
    the feelings of sorrow, despair
    and misery.

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    Heh... ths portion alone could've have been the entire poem for me. I've read more poems (and write more poems) about the damage love has done. Or maybe Im just looking in all the wrong places. Either way, Cute poem.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Love

    wonderful poem dfd full of truth and facts nicly done ^^

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    Re: Love

    wow very nice poem rai very good wording and emotions i cant wait to see more kk?keep it ↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥
    Yeah, Bye.

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