Love

Jovial as I may seem, a lonely path I walk down.
An angel I await, whose salvation is also my love.

The sunrise is her beauty and
her eyes are like the stars of night.
Her skin is silk and her voice is like a song.
An orchard of flowers bloom like our
love but stand still against time.

Night settles but the youth in us keeps us
awake and every minute together is precious.
Even in death, our love carries on into the next life

I love this one blade. It's really good^-^ I think you did a fantastic job on it^-^ Keep up the good work and write some more!!!^-^

That was a beautiful poem Blade very romantic I loved it keep up the good work...you should show this to you know who *wink*

Please read the September POTM guidelines and make adjustments, this won't qualify for judging otherwise.

anyway this poem really is awesome jason
love truly is about devotion and this poem
shows that alot ,hope to read another from
you soon.

i love the poem good work alot of emotions shown through out the poem
very good ^^ keep it ↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥