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    Love

    Jovial as I may seem, a lonely path I walk down.
    An angel I await, whose salvation is also my love.

    The sunrise is her beauty and
    her eyes are like the stars of night.
    Her skin is silk and her voice is like a song.
    An orchard of flowers bloom like our
    love but stand still against time.

    Night settles but the youth in us keeps us
    awake and every minute together is precious.
    Even in death, our love carries on into the next life

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: Love

    I love this one blade. It's really good^-^ I think you did a fantastic job on it^-^ Keep up the good work and write some more!!!^-^

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    Re: Love

    That was a beautiful poem Blade very romantic I loved it keep up the good work...you should show this to you know who *wink*

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    Re: Love

    Please read the September POTM guidelines and make adjustments, this won't qualify for judging otherwise.
    Last edited by Chiefblackhammer; Sep 07, 2007 at 12:18 PM. Reason: Corrected for POTM


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    Re: Love

    anyway this poem really is awesome jason
    love truly is about devotion and this poem
    shows that alot ,hope to read another from
    you soon.
    Last edited by Chiefblackhammer; Sep 07, 2007 at 12:19 PM. Reason: I fixed it
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Love

    i love the poem good work alot of emotions shown through out the poem
    very good ^^ keep it ↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥
    Yeah, Bye.

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