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    (May POTM Entry #2) My Sanity

    You hold me down
    tight to the ground
    like an air balloon
    ready to float away.

    When you leave
    it is as if I am cut loose
    floating off
    away into space.

    You hold me back
    when someone deserves a punch in the face
    so when you wake up in the morning
    You wake up to my smiling face.

    You are the crutch
    I can lean upon
    when I am hurt
    or coming undone.

    You are the keystone
    in the arch of my heart
    that beats only for you
    and without you would fall apart

    You are my sanity
    you hold me to my place.
    You are in every way
    my saving grace.
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    Re: (May POTM Entry #2) My Sanity

    What is cool about this is that before you even spelled out who it was for I could totally tell. I hope Chelsea reads it and loves it. You use her as an excellent metaphor for the mental state of sanity.

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    its more about her needing me. she wrote me a letter. and i suppose its about both of us and how we both need each other. She would go crazy with out me and i would with out her

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    Re: (May POTM Entry #2) My Sanity

    Quote Originally Posted by starfire1036 View Post
    its more about her needing me. she wrote me a letter. and i suppose its about both of us and how we both need each other. She would go crazy with out me and i would with out her
    You mean your not crazy(hahahaha), oh I mean that is sweet. She must be a great writer herself.

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    i have yet to read any of her work but she has been known for poetry.

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    Quote Originally Posted by starfire1036 View Post
    i have yet to read any of her work but she has been known for poetry.
    Then convince her the dark side is powerful. It would be super super super super super super cool if she posted here.

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    she just recently made an account. i shall have her post asap. when she finds her poems that is

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    Re: (May POTM Entry #2) My Sanity

    Quote Originally Posted by starfire1036 View Post
    she just recently made an account. i shall have her post asap. when she finds her poems that is
    Awesomeness. Let me know when she does, I can't wait. We are getting some great new writers.

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