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Reply With QuoteWhat is cool about this is that before you even spelled out who it was for I could totally tell. I hope Chelsea reads it and loves it. You use her as an excellent metaphor for the mental state of sanity.
You hold me down
tight to the ground
like an air balloon
ready to float away.
When you leave
it is as if I am cut loose
floating off
away into space.
You hold me back
when someone deserves a punch in the face
so when you wake up in the morning
You wake up to my smiling face.
You are the crutch
I can lean upon
when I am hurt
or coming undone.
You are the keystone
in the arch of my heart
that beats only for you
and without you would fall apart
You are my sanity
you hold me to my place.
You are in every way
my saving grace.
What is cool about this is that before you even spelled out who it was for I could totally tell. I hope Chelsea reads it and loves it. You use her as an excellent metaphor for the mental state of sanity.
starfire1036 (Apr 20, 2010)
its more about her needing me. she wrote me a letter. and i suppose its about both of us and how we both need each other. She would go crazy with out me and i would with out her
You mean your not crazy(hahahaha), oh I mean that is sweet. She must be a great writer herself.Originally Posted by starfire1036
i have yet to read any of her work but she has been known for poetry.
Then convince her the dark side is powerful. It would be super super super super super super cool if she posted here.
she just recently made an account. i shall have her post asap. when she finds her poems that is
Awesomeness. Let me know when she does, I can't wait. We are getting some great new writers.
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