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    (May POTM Entry) With Out Sanity.

    Reference: san·i·ty n. 1. The quality or condition of being sane; soundness of mind. 2. Soundness of judgment or reason. (So the blonde in me knows what she is writing about!)

    What once was there
    seems lost forever.
    It hides behind
    a new endeavor. (Noun: a strenuous effort; attempt.)<this is here just because!

    It seems displaced,
    Locked behind a steel door.
    Forbidden to rise
    to the surface once more.

    Madness consumed it
    and locked it away.
    It took over this poor body
    and its plans are to stay.

    Pain and agony
    are all that is left behind
    because this man's sanity
    it has chosen to bind.

    It's darkened his doorway
    and taken away all choice available.
    It has cracked his soul in two
    and to suppress it he is unable.

    With every breath he takes
    someone takes their last.
    A paranoid freak
    followed by a soul-filled shadow that has been cast.

    He is utterly, undeniably insane
    and that is how he will stay.
    No one will ever discover
    what happened to take his sanity away.

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    Re: (May POTM Entry) With Out Sanity.

    Did you just whip this up that quickly?

    Oddly, this is, in my opinion some of the better work I've seen of yours. I say oddly, because the theme was just posted, so unless you just happened to have a sanity related poem already written... you produced this pretty quick and effortlessly. And yet, its seems quite strongly worded.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: (May POTM Entry) With Out Sanity.

    lol i did actually. i have many poems like this of which ive already used in POTM it took me not but 5 minuets i must admit.

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    Re: (May POTM Entry) With Out Sanity.

    Your writing keeps getting better and better. You are a master, or actually I should say mistress since you are female.

    I love that you put the two definitions in there. It makes it post modern. And so quick, that is amazing. You have a gift.

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    A gift I have not, but a sense for rhyming I possess strongly.

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    Re: (May POTM Entry) With Out Sanity.

    Wow! It takes me at least a hour to write any thing decent and sometimes all day to write any thing good much less something of that quality. Bravo!
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    Re: (May POTM Entry) With Out Sanity.

    thank you. I try, I absolutely do. But my poem quality hardly compares to that of other AO poets.

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