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    yay so here goes^^


    Scared and alone I reached for you,
    I was afraid at what you could do,
    Begging and pleading, Sanity stay,
    You were going to throw it all away,

    You just couldn't here me,
    Couldn't see me,
    I was but a shadow,
    A lost soul you had given up,
    Thrown it away,
    Nothing I would do,
    Nothing I could say,

    I turned around and you left,
    I turned back and there you were,
    It was at that moment I realized,
    As the last of the sanity ran thru my fingers,

    We were one.

    A lost soul standing,
    Watching,
    Helplessly,
    As she tore thru life,
    Destroying all that was sacred,
    Bound to this world no more

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    Re: (May POTM) Lost

    Excellent structure and rhyme. I can't say I got it but it sounded awesome. The more the merrier. A few more people and this becomes competitive.

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    Re: (May POTM) Lost

    so its about multiple personalities? lol cant say i understoopd it either actually. can you tell me what it was about.

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    Its about how a while ago i was in a relationship and it ended unexpectedly. I was really depressed and I kinda lost who i was. It 's just kinda how i tried to save myself but I never really caught on or got it...


    is it ok if I enter anouther?

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    It has been stated by chief that entering more than once is allowed. You just cant vote for a person more than once. You can only vote for one of their entries.

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    Re: (May POTM) Lost

    Quote Originally Posted by starfire1036 View Post
    It has been stated by chief that entering more than once is allowed. You just cant vote for a person more than once. You can only vote for one of their entries.
    oh okey doke will do then ...................................

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