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POTM (Poem of the Month) Poems submitted for Poem of the Month contests.

View Poll Results: Best poem of the May entries is:
Kiani Haki22 0 0%
beast 4 40.00%
Peach_follows 3 30.00%
FLawEdmiNd 2 20.00%
PhoenixSara 1 10.00%
HolderOfTheDarkChalice 0 0%
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Old Jun 01, 2009, 07:49 PM   #1 (permalink)
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May Voting - Agony [Winner = beast]

The contest will be public vote however I will be monitoring the voting and if foul play occurs then Hammer will be very very very upset with said persons and will evoke full mod wrath .

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Kiani Haki22
Quote:
Originally Posted by Kiani Haki22 View Post
Turning and switching the ways of the body
Not knowing where to go, agony
Twisting time, Distortion of minutes
Wanting to go but no where to turn, agony

Beating of the heart, restlessness of the soul
Wanting more pleasure beyond your pain, agony
Eternal bleeding of Emotional crimson
Flowing within, wanting it to stop, agony

Opening wounds, Cutting to release pain
Glimpse of life flash before the eyes, agony
Silent screams inside, Throbbing with grief
Craving for relief, Unfulfilling wishes, agony
Peach_follows
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Joe says I'm special.
That's why he picked me up first...
...Made me sit in front.

Joe? He drove my bus.
I'd tell you about our place...
But he said I can't.

He said it's secret.
When he took me to our place...
We did secret stuff.

Joe liked to play games.
He liked our secret game best...
...But I think it hurts.

Sometimes he don't stop.
Not even when I'm crying.
I don't like that game.

I think we were bad.
I didn't mean to do it...
He said I'm special.

When I told Mommy...
....She broke the bathroom mirror.
I didn't mean to.

Joe don't drive no more.
I got him in big trouble.
Everyone's so mad.

Joe said it was fun.
playing house, like grown ups do.
Its his favorite game.

I'm so so sorry.
But I couldn't keep playing.
It just hurt so bad.

This is all my fault.
I couldn't keep a secret.
Joe said not to tell.





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FLawEdmiNd
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Feel me crawl into your bones
mixing irreversibly in the veins of life.
Madman alchemic rituals;
close your eyes onto my dogma.

Likely there will be no sound
inside the hermetic vacuum of our union,
which has turned your lips white.
Suffocation becomes you.

Ceiling high mirrors record the message.
Watch with me, shiny glass.
Your body is a vast monopoly,
in immediate need of redecoration.

Bad deeds are rewarded in kind, lover;
flesh wilts under the serrated kiss.
Alouette, gentille alouette.
Chirp something nice for me.

Alouette, je te plumerai.
Stars and destiny, quickly you forget.
Je te plumerai la tete;
lay cold in agony my perfect love.

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Alouette is a song we are taught in school and is dark in the fashion of nursery rhymes. It's really fun to sing and fits nicely here.

By the way, this was totally a beheading.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Alouette_(song)
PhoenixSara
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I dare not say
how he takes my breathe away.
Each waking moment that i dont get to see,
the kind of man he is supposed to be.

My heart just keeps on squeezing,
My head spins in despair.
Each moment we are not together,
Each passing moment he is not there.

My eyes turn blood shot
I sleep so less each day.
Each moment he does not tell me
that he loves me no matter what they say.

My lungs don't help at all.
They refuse to breathe and continue
to just collapse each day..
My chest feels like a ton of bricks just hit me.
What more do i have to say.

She then comes along and asks him.
I can be your light and day.
My eyes continue to cry in silence.
Yet my mind screams in pain each day.

When will you see the pain you are causing.
Just by staying away.
I will choose to suffer in silence,
I choose to take your pain.

The agony grows deeper,
as she comes closer to your heart.
Yet i know that with this agony,
I know for sure the pain will go away.
starfire1036 # 2
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If you cannot love me today,
than you shall not love me tomorrow
and in your mind I shall stay
causing you only grief and sorrow.

You have givin me no other option
but to cause you great dismay
because you refused my love
so, this is what I say.

Unto you great anguish
and pain a'plenty,
for my heart is broken
because of your refusal to love me.

Agony is what you will suffer
and for year and years to come
you shall have no other lover
nor a daughter or a son.


Tada! Made just seconds after reading the new POTM THEME. See how much one little thing can brighten/change someones day. Thank you for posting the theme hammer.
HolderOfTheDarkChalice
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This affliction i have tortures my soul
it fuels my need for attention , agonizingly
i live each day with out your words of love ,
if only i could have you again.

Missing you has me in agony all the time
my heart is always in pain , how i wish you
were here right now , my thoughts torture
me when i lay in bed at night its always you
im thinking of.

Agony its something that i live with i just
wish that i could get over it but i can't
and thats my fault , how can i help myself
when all i do is miss you its agony not having you.

Misery i go through it everyday because of you
i live day by day in agony because of missing you
my heart always tortures me i just wish i could have
you back once more,


Please note that receiverofhell's entries were disqualified due to him/her being banned.

starfire1036 has also been disqualified and banned for creating multiple accounts to vote for his/herself. I have no idea what part of I would be looking at the voting wasn't clear and cheating would not go over well with me but let this be an example of what not to do.

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Old Jun 01, 2009, 07:58 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: May Voting - Agony

Oh my gosh that is so sad Peach_Follows. I feel for you. but don't let it drag you down. Some thing of the sort happened to me too. It was with my cousin. But I learned to get past it and you will too so be strong!
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Old Jun 02, 2009, 06:27 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: May Voting - Agony

It's a hard choice with these many entries to chose from...
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For some reason...
Somewhat or something got into my head to chose starfire's#2 entry...
I do love her poem but especially it touches my heart to no end!...
YAY! for starfire!*CLAPS*....
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Old Jun 02, 2009, 11:04 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Re: May Voting - Agony

i didnt realise it till just now but when i voted it was for starfire
but there are 2 of them with the same number are they the same person?
with 2 different names? just asking since there so close together with the
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Re: May Voting - Agony

Starfire just submitted 2 poems...

I voted for Beast, just because his poem is great, it captures agony without spelling it out in black and white. Very nicely written.
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Old Jun 02, 2009, 02:16 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Re: May Voting - Agony

she did? is that allowed? i thought it was one poem per person
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Re: May Voting - Agony

I made no such rule for the competition And yes starfire submitted 2 poems.
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Re: May Voting - Agony

oh well even though that does suck alright then
never had more than one before this contest though
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