For in the past
i see just me and you,
and in the present
ive been forced to start a new

You left me cold
with out reason or care.
my heart you did scold
and my feeling you did tear

I sit here now
just thinking of you
and asking myself
what the hell did i do?

Was it the way I kissed you?
Did i do it wrong?
Was it when we danced?
Did i play the right song?

How did i miss
the fact you weren't happy?
All i tried to do
ended in you feeling angry.

In the mirror my eyes wade
and in the past your memories fade
in the wake of a new love
like one sent from above

Originally Posted by Toxic Otaku Wow...That has to be one of the most beutifull and yet one of the sadest poems I've ever read. - very, very, very well done. It realy touches the heart.

Originally Posted by Lasura A rather nice poem, although this theme of break-ups is far too common and the flow could have been nicer. On the other hand, I see that you have put an effort in to make it ryhme, which is rather great, and I like your language use ^^ However, the biggest problem here is that this poem is posted here on the first of february and the boss said "1/30, no later" >.< Please be carefull with the dates >.< Take care ^^