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    Re: The Monster Mash

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    Yes... the imagery... is kinda gross.. xD

    "The very merry werewolf had a bad hair day.
    The raven shrieking "NEVERMORE!" finally flew away."

    I wonder...

    "The vampire chose to drink tomato juice instead.
    The banshee finally realized the frog in her throat was dead."

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    Oh, I see.

    Well, haven't you seen someone (perhaps with a large beard) when it wasn't behaving?

    And, of course, she didn't literally have an amphibious creature in her throat . . . it's one of those euphemisms that I corrupted.

    Thank you. I like it, too.

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    Cool Re: The Monster Mash

    Yeah,

    I agree with Rayme, It does sound like a song

    It reminds me of a song that I sang in school for Halloween 'The Monster Mash' ... What a coincidence...

    Very well done Punishment! It made me laugh as well

    The poem is excellent with it's description, nice ending as well.

    -x- Zainab -x-

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    Re: The Monster Mash

    Well, the title is the title of a pretty common song. It's not the Monster Mash, though.

    Thank you, Zainab.

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    Re: The Monster Mash

    wooow! This is an interesting poem you made divine. The structure is good and interesting too and the contents of the poem is really unique (Honestly, I never thought of having "The very merry werewolf had a bad hair day".

    The poem is short yet it is scary and funny at the same time!!! This presented the lives of various scary creatures. You are very creative Divine. =^_^= keep up the good work.

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    Re: The Monster Mash

    I really like that.

    It's cute, in the good way. It's funny, and upbeat, and you can see every thing you describe. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks.

    Oh and Happy Halloween!

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    Everyone is so nice and supportive! Thank you all so much!

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    Re: The Monster Mash

    I thought this poem was short & cute!!! It reminds me back in my Halloween days... <Trick or Treat> Good job even if it is just random... ^_^

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    Ah, many thanks! And may you have so much candy that your teeth hurt just by looking at your load!

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