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    Movie of Death <horror>

    Some might call me crazy
    That I just might be
    But I think Death is out to get me

    I don't know what to say but I see it in my dreams
    Breaking into a sweat with no screams
    I am a hitting target under a beam

    Aiming for me in the after life
    I crapped out with snake eyes in the life of dice
    I escaped death once I can't do it twice

    Death wants my soul
    I feel that I am too young
    But if my times up I must be too old

    This paranoid insomnia I hate
    I am frightened to go to sleep
    That's why I stay awake

    I am haunted by the Grim Reaper
    Being hunted like it is the teacher
    Of that demon creature Jeepers Creepers

    I believe Death had lost love & drowned
    In it's own misery like Voorhees Jason
    It reminds me of Leprechaun who wants it's gold back cause it's so impatient

    Stays in my nightmares like I lived on Elm Street
    Claw it's way into my dreams
    As if it's name is Krueger Freddy it seems

    Must I walk the dimension of hell
    With this determined Hellraiser
    The killer of life the ultimate slayer

    The thing is I've never seen it's face
    Does it even have one
    When darkness falls is it gone without a trace

    Does it have razor sharp teeth
    With stale putrid breath
    Is that what lies beneath

    Probably have dark beady eyes that bleeds
    I don't know really I just wonder

    Is that my heart beat sounding like thunder.??

    In my dead silence room with a stir of echoes & the covers I'm under

    You would think I was playing hide & seek
    Got my ears on alert listening to every shriek
    While everything around me seems so bleak

    Death to me is like the Boogeyman to kids
    It's a fear you try not to think of
    You just hope to get rid

    Who knew that time & I would be at a race
    I always knew I was going to die one day
    But who says dying was easy as child's play

    I always hoped to go peacefully in my dreams
    Not taken from bed like a shuddering fear scene
    Something that belongs in horror films or the day on Halloween

    This is my omen that exist
    Too bad I can't repel it with an exorcist

    No longer must I wait
    The time has come for me to meet my fate

    My fortune is already sealed
    My soul is the prize & Death made the deal
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    Re: Movie of Death <horror>

    whoa... the rhyme scheme is very nice.. i love it~! and your theme... very cool nicely done there ^^

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    Re: Movie of Death <horror>

    You truly are kind... I thank you for your praise... I just thought I would write something I was scared of it was either that or spiders... < Just kidding > I just wanted to play death the role of some of the horror/thriller films I watched/seen & see if I could pull it off...

    It didn't turn out how I really wanted, but I was running in so many directions it wasn't even funny & if it wasn't for the deadline I probably still be running (I've been having writer's block lately)... But thanks for the compliment I very much 'ppreciate it...

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    Re: Movie of Death <horror>

    All of your references are great! I recommend capitalizing Death's name, to make It more anthropomorphic, more human, more real (and therefore, more menacing).

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    Re: Movie of Death <horror>

    Your recommend was noted & I very much 'ppreciate it that & the compliment... Not to many ppl would look out for that compelling mishap & if so probably wouldn't tell me... I give you my kudos' to you & *hat tips* to you... Thanks a million plus 3 ^_^ !!!

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    Re: Movie of Death <horror>

    You're welcome a million + 3! Best of luck!

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    Re: Movie of Death <horror>

    COOL! Whats funny about this... Is that through out, there is the Idea of death coming for you. And then you work in the movie titles. But the concept of being hunted by death, reminds me of a movie I don't think you mentioned.... Final Destination.
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    Re: Movie of Death <horror>

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    COOL! Whats funny about this... Is that through out, there is the Idea of death coming for you. And then you work in the movie titles. But the concept of being hunted by death, reminds me of a movie I don't think you mentioned.... Final Destination.
    I love Final Destination! Good movies, all three of them! It's not really a horror series, though; it's more of a suspense.

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