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![]() | Music is to us, as it is to the world (A Frozen Rose an Shippo Production) Music is my imaginary friend that breaks things. Music is the voice that calls my heart to jump in an ocean of warm. Music is the Book I cannot put down. Music is the prettiest Present under the Christmas tree. Music is the color that mixed with my black and white world. Music is the candle that burns forever. Music is the beat of my heart until the last call. Music is the confession of my crush. Music is a shadow holds me in loneliness. Music is the sound that always calls my name. Music is the ray that shines the light deep inside of me. Music is that shot of adrenaline. Music is the heat that makes me melt. Music is the sounds of my dreams come true. Music is the sound of winds calling the wings of birds. Music is the rainbow ray that leads me to craziness. Music is the reflection of my feelings. Music is what influences my voice. Music is my hearts greatest pain reliever.
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![]() ![]() | Re: Music is to us, as it is to the world i cant really consider this to be a poem but that is me. I would really have liked it better if you started off by going Music is... my imaginary friend that breaks things. the prettiest Present under the Christmas tree. the reflection of my feelings. the ray that shines the light deep inside of me. lol idk im weard i wnt like it unless it rhymes but im sure id like it if u chose to send me a copy of it in the style suggested haha.
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![]() | Re: Music is to us, as it is to the world Not too many anaphors have been admitted for poem of the month, in fact this may be the only one. Good job. |
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![]() | Re: Music is to us, as it is to the world Yeah you nailed the type of peom we were going for beast. For a moment I was a bit worried no knew what type is was or even consider it a poem with all the repetition and all. Besides this was the most simple one without it being too difficult or too beginners faulty. We were going for an epiphora but it was too big of a handle.
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