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![]() ![]() | My Angel's Song This one was made by Myself and Shippo My Angel's Song I. Whenever the bell rings A frightful bird steps through the door It chirps its usual nag at me Then returns back to its nest II. Every time the bell rings I find myself at his door, Waking him with my heaven sent song Then I go home ready for tomorrows round. III. Always the bell rings At the dawn of every day and at the dawn of every dusk I await for the door to open once more. IV. He awaits my arrival like a puppy to its master. The anger in his eyes bear a child Its name is relief. It welcomes me. V. The relief stares me down and I wait for the pain to dissipate along with my worries It's nag turns to song. VI. Song seems to calm his soul, so I'll sing my heart dry. But its crosses my mind. Would he replace me when gone? VII. The song ends with two words Two words that ensure everything Together Forever And we will stay just like that VIII. I'm the reason he wakes The reason he sleeps The reason he dreams I am the son of the saved
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![]() | Re: My Angel's Song Shippo is the collaboration queen and doubtless has dominated the forum. "The anger in his eyes bear a child Its name is relief. It welcomes me." powerful stuff going on in this poem. |
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