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Old Sep 29, 2009, 11:35 AM   #1 (permalink)
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My Angel's Song

This one was made by Myself and Shippo


My Angel's Song

I.
Whenever the bell rings
A frightful bird steps through the door
It chirps its usual nag at me
Then returns back to its nest

II.
Every time the bell rings
I find myself at his door,
Waking him with my heaven sent song
Then I go home ready for tomorrows round.

III.
Always the bell rings
At the dawn of every day
and at the dawn of every dusk
I await for the door to open once more.

IV.
He awaits my arrival
like a puppy to its master.
The anger in his eyes bear a child
Its name is relief. It welcomes me.

V.
The relief stares me down
and I wait for the pain to dissipate
along with my worries
It's nag turns to song.

VI.
Song seems to calm his soul,
so I'll sing my heart dry.
But its crosses my mind.
Would he replace me when gone?

VII.
The song ends with two words
Two words that ensure everything
Together Forever
And we will stay just like that

VIII.
I'm the reason he wakes
The reason he sleeps
The reason he dreams
I am the son of the saved
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Old Sep 29, 2009, 01:03 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: My Angel's Song

Shippo is the collaboration queen and doubtless has dominated the forum.
"The anger in his eyes bear a child
Its name is relief. It welcomes me."
powerful stuff going on in this poem.
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