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    My Compass Rose - a haiku for the december entry

    I was a wanderer, lost just floating in the sea,
    No one to guide me, no one to make me see.
    You came my way showing me where to go,
    Now with you i know I will never be lost.


    *** author's note: for this month i wanted to do a haiku . something simple sweet just to tell my someone special how i feel. it's not as grand as some declaration. but this is me.. *****
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    Re: My Compass Rose - a haiku for the december entry

    Khhhhmmmm... >.< That is not a haiku... Haiku is three lines long with 5-7-5 sylabes in the lines

    The poem is very nice and loving and it flows nicely... I like the theme about being a wanderer. I actually like the poem pretty much, however its slightly out of the rules >.<

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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