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Old Mar 10, 2008, 04:49 PM   #1 (permalink)
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My Heart

My Heart

You have already touched my heart
So why are you now oh so tart
To my feelings of need
Those that you call greed

You're the only one
That's ever been my sun!
And you throw it away
Right here as I lay

All that and you shun my kindness
I guess it may only be my blindness!
Only in my soul you did stay
The only place I let you lay

And now you say we're done
You say there's no more fun
Can't you see there's one I need
And that's the only one for whom I'll bleed?

It's all the harsh word's part
That there is now two pieces to my heart

My love
Don't stab my soul
My love
Don't stab my soul


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Old Mar 10, 2008, 05:06 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like the way that you've expressed how you have loved someone and now you need understanding from them. I always like to ask this question. Is this inspiration from a real life experience or something that you felt you needed to write?
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Old Mar 10, 2008, 05:29 PM   #3 (permalink)
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It's something that I actually ALMOST felt for real. When my girlfriend was about to break up with me because of a lot of difficulties. . .
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awww thats so sad and sweet..... i love the poem tho its awesome and i like sad love poems so its the perfect poem in my mind
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