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    My Heart

    My Heart

    You have already touched my heart
    So why are you now oh so tart
    To my feelings of need
    Those that you call greed

    You're the only one
    That's ever been my sun!
    And you throw it away
    Right here as I lay

    All that and you shun my kindness
    I guess it may only be my blindness!
    Only in my soul you did stay
    The only place I let you lay

    And now you say we're done
    You say there's no more fun
    Can't you see there's one I need
    And that's the only one for whom I'll bleed?

    It's all the harsh word's part
    That there is now two pieces to my heart

    My love
    Don't stab my soul
    My love
    Don't stab my soul


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    Re: My Heart

    I like the way that you've expressed how you have loved someone and now you need understanding from them. I always like to ask this question. Is this inspiration from a real life experience or something that you felt you needed to write?
    --//Nothing Ventured, Nothing Gained\\--

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    Re: My Heart

    It's something that I actually ALMOST felt for real. When my girlfriend was about to break up with me because of a lot of difficulties. . .

    A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!

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    Re: My Heart

    awww thats so sad and sweet..... i love the poem tho its awesome and i like sad love poems so its the perfect poem in my mind

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