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    My heart

    while you're asleep
    and in the moments you are awake,
    my soul is yours to keep
    and my heart is yours to take.



    after a karismatic bit of thoughttttt. i determined this poem to be complete. as beast said... just these four lines have a major impact... and shit i posted this in the wrong forum... >.> um... sorry >.<
    request to be moved to the poems forum?
    Last edited by starfire1036; Mar 31, 2009 at 10:42 PM.

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    Re: My heart

    Beautiful and simple. These four lines say it all and that is not an easy task to do.

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    Re: My heart

    you have a habit of not finishing when you post? lol it happens but it kinda gets annoyining so dont do it often
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    Re: My heart

    I like it alot, it's very beautiful and romantic, at the same time.

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    Re: My heart

    Quote Originally Posted by blackrose92 View Post
    you have a habit of not finishing when you post? lol it happens but it kinda gets annoyining so dont do it often
    ah well i didnt get to change it cause i got grounded... fight in school bleh.... but i consider it complete now... so enjoy

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