Beautiful and simple. These four lines say it all and that is not an easy task to do.
while you're asleep
and in the moments you are awake,
my soul is yours to keep
and my heart is yours to take.
after a karismatic bit of thoughttttt. i determined this poem to be complete. as beast said... just these four lines have a major impact... and shit i posted this in the wrong forum... >.> um... sorry >.<
request to be moved to the poems forum?
Last edited by starfire1036; Mar 31, 2009 at 10:42 PM.
Beautiful and simple. These four lines say it all and that is not an easy task to do.
you have a habit of not finishing when you post? lol it happensbut it kinda gets annoyining so dont do it often
I'm the best you'll ever have because i am that f*ing AMA-zing chic who can stand on her own d*n feet and becasue of you I am the GreatestThank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen
I like it alot, it's very beautiful and romantic, at the same time.
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