My heart

starfire1036 · Mar 17, 2009, 09:51 AM

while you're asleep
and in the moments you are awake,
my soul is yours to keep
and my heart is yours to take.

after a karismatic bit of thoughttttt. i determined this poem to be complete. as beast said... just these four lines have a major impact... and shit i posted this in the wrong forum... >.> um... sorry >.<
request to be moved to the poems forum?

beast · Mar 22, 2009, 10:10 PM

Beautiful and simple. These four lines say it all and that is not an easy task to do.

blackrose92 · Mar 23, 2009, 07:53 AM

you have a habit of not finishing when you post? lol it happens

but it kinda gets annoyining so dont do it often

DemonicKagomeTahoshi · Mar 23, 2009, 08:35 AM

I like it alot, it's very beautiful and romantic, at the same time.

starfire1036 · Mar 31, 2009, 11:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by blackrose92

you have a habit of not finishing when you post? lol it happens

but it kinda gets annoyining so dont do it often

ah well i didnt get to change it cause i got grounded... fight in school bleh.... but i consider it complete now... so enjoy

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starfire1036 Otaku Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 282 Thanks: 51 Thanked 34 Times in 32 Posts	My heart while you're asleep and in the moments you are awake, my soul is yours to keep and my heart is yours to take. after a karismatic bit of thoughttttt. i determined this poem to be complete. as beast said... just these four lines have a major impact... and shit i posted this in the wrong forum... >.> um... sorry >.< request to be moved to the poems forum? __________________ Last edited by starfire1036; Mar 31, 2009 at 11:42 PM.
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Mar 22, 2009, 10:10 PM	#2 (permalink)
beast Devoted Otaku Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Cuba Posts: 872 Thanks: 278 Thanked 79 Times in 75 Posts	Re: My heart Beautiful and simple. These four lines say it all and that is not an easy task to do.
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blackrose92 Otaku Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: SENIOR!!!! TEXAS USA =] Posts: 471 Thanks: 61 Thanked 32 Times in 30 Posts	Re: My heart you have a habit of not finishing when you post? lol it happens but it kinda gets annoyining so dont do it often __________________ i am who i am because im just that great you are because of who you are because you are a loser Thank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen
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DemonicKagomeTahoshi Otaku Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Always with my lover in his hearts, or with him no matter what Posts: 210 Thanks: 43 Thanked 17 Times in 17 Posts	Re: My heart I like it alot, it's very beautiful and romantic, at the same time.
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