The song in my heart
makes want to leap for joy.
it reminds me of days
when everything was alive
but now regret fills me
i never got to say how i felt
how much i long to hold you.
Memories haunt me
your laughter still lingers,
your touch still burns.
how i should have said i loved you dearly.
now i know that i can never say the words.
Now i know you not be mine.
How can i loose someone
who was never truly mine?
How can i love someone
who doesn't give me the date or time?
Call me a fool , call me naive
Yet this song continues to say
I love you in the most unconditonal way.
Last edited by PhoenixSara; Jun 11, 2008 at 04:52 AM. Reason: edit post
"In your arms is where i will be, I love you till my forever ends."
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Nice poem, however editing and revising can come handy someday!
The song in my heart
makes me want to leap for joy.
it reminds me of days
when everything was aliveAnd* "i" is usually capitalized, but that's your decision to make.How can i loose someone
who wws never truly mine?
How can i love someone
who doen's ? give me the date or time?
Hope this helps! Next time revise your poem before submitting, it will make reading it all the more enjoyable! And that is a good thing.
PhoenixSara (Jun 11, 2008)
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