Nice poem, however editing and revising can come handy someday!
The song in my heart
makes me want to leap for joy.
it reminds me of days
when everything was aliveAnd* "i" is usually capitalized, but that's your decision to make.How can i loose someone
who wws never truly mine?
How can i love someone
who doen's ? give me the date or time?
Hope this helps! Next time revise your poem before submitting, it will make reading it all the more enjoyable! And that is a good thing .