Rinkusu

I know its a bit early but I'm not sure if ill get the opportunity later, please enjoy.

My body it seeks a home
I’ve left my heart in a dark little hole
Everything has abandoned me even my soul
I’m left crawling and aching for a breath
As my pulse numbs my entire body

My throat it dries in agony
As I search to grab for somebody
I stumble to barely catch my fall
And now I feel like a ragged doll

Humans without faces
Lurk around me to leave no sign of traces
I feel my tears
As everybody looks around me with fears

This manifested room
My helpless body drowned in gloom
My breathing it slows
This pain that grows
And still with nobody to help me stand
Abandoned and now I’m banned

In the dark little corner
I wish he would come a bit sooner
The shadow in the dark
Waiting to entwine my non-existing heart

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xEmoxTwilightXLuverx

dang.......that was realy good, i liked it..... i cant write poems...... they always end up in the trash.... keep it up!! hope to hear more,
xChrissyx

Kiani Haki22

This was good, it had a somewhat good rhythm. I like the ending the best I like how it made the fact the poem was ending known. Work on keeping your stanza's the same amout for each one. It will make it look good, professional.

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