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    On This Night (November POTM Entry)

    On this night
    I lay my burden down
    To sink or to sail
    Wishing boats farewell
    --Odessa Chen


    On this night
    I lay my burden down
    To sink or to sail
    Wishing boats farewell

    My lonely soul drifts away
    As the boat sail today
    He, my love goes along
    But we shall not be apart, not for long

    A slight kiss of the hand in a goodbye wave
    I watch the boat sail, as my simple heart caves
    My heart takes a place on that boat
    As I hold tight onto his last note

    The note that wished me goodbye
    As I read it a single tear formed upon my eye
    I kissed it as if it were him
    Only seeing my future now is dim

    On this night
    I lay my burden down
    To sink or to sail
    Wishing boats farewell
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    Re: On This Night (November POTM Entry)

    this poem is sad , so sad. but it makes you think why .
    "In your arms is where i will be, I love you till my forever ends."
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